Editing User talk:Delwack

Clannad Full Edit Pass

SCENES HISTORY AND LOG

This is a copy of the main table, but not linked to it so I can keep track of my editing progress.  Let's hope I get through a couple of routes before I get burned out >.>

Note: Doki has picked up this project.  see announcement at [http://doki.co/2012/06/07/clannad_vn_announcement/]

I will no longer be updating this table here.  

Strike = Finished editing pass on entire scene.  * = partially completed
<table cellspacing="0" style="text-align:center" class="wikitable">

<tr>
<th></th>
<th>Main</th>
<th>Fuko</th>
<th>Tomoyo</th>
<th>Kyou</th>
<th>Kotomi</th>
<th>Yukine</th>
<th>Nagisa</th>
<th>After</th>
<th colspan="2">Others</th>
</tr>
<tr>
<th>April 14</th>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN0414|SEEN0414]]'''*</td>
<td colspan="6"></td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN6800|SEEN6800]]'''</td>
<th rowspan="2">Sanae's<br/>Scenario</th>
<td rowspan="2">'''[[Clannad:SEEN7000|SEEN7000]]'''</td>
</tr>

<tr>
<th>April 15</th>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN0415|SEEN0415]]'''*</td>
<td rowspan="2"></td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN2415|SEEN2415]]'''*</td>
<td><s>'''[[Clannad:SEEN3415|SEEN3415]]'''</s></td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN4415|SEEN4415]]'''</td>
<td colspan="2"></td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN6801|SEEN6801]]'''</td>
</tr>

<tr>
<th>April 16</th>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN0416|SEEN0416]]'''*</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN2416|SEEN2416]]'''</td>
<td><s>'''[[Clannad:SEEN3416|SEEN3416]]'''</s></td>
<td colspan="2"></td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN6416|SEEN6416]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN6802|SEEN6802]]'''</td>
<th rowspan="2">Yuusuke's<br/>Scenario</th>
<td rowspan="2">'''[[Clannad:SEEN7100|SEEN7100]]'''</td>
</tr>

<tr>
<th>April 17</th>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN0417|SEEN0417]]'''*</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN1417|SEEN1417]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN2417|SEEN2417]]'''</td>
<td><s>'''[[Clannad:SEEN3417|SEEN3417]]'''</s></td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN4417|SEEN4417]]'''</td>
<td></td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN6417|SEEN6417]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN6803|SEEN6803]]'''</td>
</tr>

<tr>
<th>April 18</th>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN0418|SEEN0418]]'''*</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN1418|SEEN1418]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN2418|SEEN2418]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN3418|SEEN3418]]'''*</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN4418|SEEN4418]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN5418|SEEN5418]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN6418|SEEN6418]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN6900|SEEN6900]]'''*</td>
<th rowspan="2">Akio's<br/>Scenario</th>
<td rowspan="2">'''[[Clannad:SEEN7200|SEEN7200]]'''</td>
</tr>

<tr>
<th>April 19</th>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN0419|SEEN0419]]*'''</td>
<td></td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN2419|SEEN2419]]'''</td>
<td><s>'''[[Clannad:SEEN3419|SEEN3419]]'''</s></td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN4419|SEEN4419]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN5419|SEEN5419]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN6419|SEEN6419]]'''</td>
<td rowspan="2"></td>
</tr>

<tr>
<th>April 20</th>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN0420|SEEN0420]]*'''</td>
<td colspan="3"></td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN4420|SEEN4420]]'''</td>
<td></td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN6420|SEEN6420]]'''</td>
<th rowspan="2">Koumura's<br/>Scenario</th>
<td rowspan="2">'''[[Clannad:SEEN7300|SEEN7300]]'''</td>
</tr>

<tr>
<th>April 21</th>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN0421|SEEN0421]]*'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN1421|SEEN1421]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN2421|SEEN2421]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN3421|SEEN3421]]*'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN4421|SEEN4421]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN5421|SEEN5421]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN6421|SEEN6421]]'''</td>
<th>Interlude</th>
</tr>

<tr>
<th>April 22</th>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN0422|SEEN0422]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN1422|SEEN1422]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN2422|SEEN2422]]'''</td>
<td><s>'''[[Clannad:SEEN3422|SEEN3422]]'''</s></td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN4422|SEEN4422]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN5422|SEEN5422]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN6422|SEEN6422]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN6444|SEEN6444]]'''</td>
<th rowspan="2">Sunoharas'<br/>Scenario</th>
<td rowspan="2">'''[[Clannad:SEEN7400|SEEN7400]]'''</td>
</tr>

<tr>
<th>April 23</th>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN0423|SEEN0423]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN1423|SEEN1423]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN2423|SEEN2423]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN3423|SEEN3423]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN4423|SEEN4423]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN5423|SEEN5423]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN6423|SEEN6423]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN6445|SEEN6445]]'''</td>
</tr>

<tr>
<th>April 24</th>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN0424|SEEN0424]]'''</td>
<td rowspan="2"></td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN2424|SEEN2424]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN3424|SEEN3424]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN4424|SEEN4424]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN5424|SEEN5424]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN6424|SEEN6424]]'''</td>
<td></td>
<th rowspan="2">Misae's<br/>Scenario</th>
<td rowspan="2">'''[[Clannad:SEEN7500|SEEN7500]]'''</td>
</tr>

<tr>
<th>April 25</th>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN0425|SEEN0425]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN2425|SEEN2425]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN3425|SEEN3425]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN4425|SEEN4425]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN5425|SEEN5425]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN6425|SEEN6425]]'''</td>
<th>Mei &amp; Nagisa</th>
</tr>

<tr>
<th>April 26</th>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN0426|SEEN0426]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN1426|SEEN1426]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN2426|SEEN2426]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN3426|SEEN3426]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN4426|SEEN4426]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN5426|SEEN5426]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN6426|SEEN6426]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN6726|SEEN6726]]'''</td>
<th rowspan="2">Kappei's<br/>Scenario</th>
<td rowspan="2">'''[[Clannad:SEEN7600|SEEN7600]]'''*</td>
</tr>

<tr>
<th>April 27</th>
<td></td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN1427|SEEN1427]]'''</td>
<td colspan="2"></td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN4427|SEEN4427]]'''</td>
<td></td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN6427|SEEN6427]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN6727|SEEN6727]]'''</td>
</tr>

<tr>
<th>April 28</th>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN0428|SEEN0428]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN1428|SEEN1428]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN2428|SEEN2428]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN3428|SEEN3428]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN4428|SEEN4428]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN5428|SEEN5428]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN6428|SEEN6428]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN6728|SEEN6728]]'''</td>
<td rowspan="2" colspan="2"></td>
</tr>

<tr>
<th>April 29</th>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN0429|SEEN0429]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN1429|SEEN1429]]'''</td>
<td></td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN3429|SEEN3429]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN4429|SEEN4429]]'''</td>
<td></td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN6429|SEEN6429]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN6729|SEEN6729]]'''</td>
</tr>

<tr>
<th>April 30</th>
<td rowspan="9"></td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN1430|SEEN1430]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN2430|SEEN2430]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN3430|SEEN3430]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN4430|SEEN4430]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN5430|SEEN5430]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN6430|SEEN6430]]'''</td>
<td rowspan="19"></td>
<th>BAD End 1</th>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN0444|SEEN0444]]'''</td>
</tr>

<tr>
<th>May 1</th>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN1501|SEEN1501]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN2501|SEEN2501]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN3501|SEEN3501]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN4501|SEEN4501]]'''</td>
<td rowspan="8"></td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN6501|SEEN6501]]'''</td>
<th>Gamebook</th>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN0555|SEEN0555]]'''</td>
</tr>

<tr>
<th>May 2</th>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN1502|SEEN1502]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN2502|SEEN2502]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN3502|SEEN3502]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN4502|SEEN4502]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN6502|SEEN6502]]'''</td>
<th>BAD End 2</th>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN0666|SEEN0666]]'''</td>
</tr>

<tr>
<th>May 3</th>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN1503|SEEN1503]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN2503|SEEN2503]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN3503|SEEN3503]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN4503|SEEN4503]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN6503|SEEN6503]]'''</td>
<td rowspan="5" colspan="2"></td>
</tr>

<tr>
<th>May 4</th>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN1504|SEEN1504]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN2504|SEEN2504]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN3504|SEEN3504]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN4504|SEEN4504]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN6504|SEEN6504]]'''</td>
</tr>

<tr>
<th>May 5</th>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN1505|SEEN1505]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN2505|SEEN2505]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN3505|SEEN3505]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN4505|SEEN4505]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN6505|SEEN6505]]'''</td>
</tr>

<tr>
<th>May 6</th>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN1506|SEEN1506]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN2506|SEEN2506]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN3506|SEEN3506]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN4506|SEEN4506]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN6506|SEEN6506]]'''</td>
</tr>

<tr>
<th>May 7</th>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN1507|SEEN1507]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN2507|SEEN2507]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN3507|SEEN3507]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN4507|SEEN4507]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN6507|SEEN6507]]'''</td>
</tr>

<tr>
<th>May 8</th>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN1508|SEEN1508]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN2508|SEEN2508]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN3508|SEEN3508]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN4508|SEEN4508]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN6508|SEEN6508]]'''</td>
<th rowspan="3">Kyou's<br/>After<br/>Scene</th>
<td rowspan="3">'''[[Clannad:SEEN3001|SEEN3001]]'''</td>
</tr>

<tr>
<th>May 9</th>
<td rowspan="2" colspan="2"></td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN2509|SEEN2509]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN3509|SEEN3509]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN4509|SEEN4509]]'''</td>
<td colspan="2"></td>
</tr>

<tr>
<th>May 10</th>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN2510|SEEN2510]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN3510|SEEN3510]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN4510|SEEN4510]]'''</td>
<td rowspan="5"></td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN6510|SEEN6510]]'''</td>
</tr>

<tr>
<th>May 11</th>
<td rowspan="8"></td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN1511|SEEN1511]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN2511|SEEN2511]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN3511|SEEN3511]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN4511|SEEN4511]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN6511|SEEN6511]]'''</td>
<th rowspan="8">Fuko<br/>Master</th>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN1001|SEEN1001]]'''</td>
</tr>

<tr>
<th>May 12</th>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN1512|SEEN1512]]'''</td>
<td></td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN3512|SEEN3512]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN4512|SEEN4512]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN6512|SEEN6512]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN1002|SEEN1002]]'''</td>
</tr>

<tr>
<th>May 13</th>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN1513|SEEN1513]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN2513|SEEN2513]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN3513|SEEN3513]]'''*</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN4513|SEEN4513]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN6513|SEEN6513]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN1003|SEEN1003]]'''</td>
</tr>

<tr>
<th>May 14</th>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN1514|SEEN1514]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN2514|SEEN2514]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN3514|SEEN3514]]'''</td>
<th>EPILOGUE</th>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN6514|SEEN6514]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN1004|SEEN1004]]'''</td>
</tr>

<tr>
<th>May 15</th>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN1515|SEEN1515]]'''</td>
<td rowspan="4" colspan="2"></td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN4800|SEEN4800]]'''</td>
<td rowspan="4" colspan="2"></td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN1005|SEEN1005]]'''</td>
</tr>

<tr>
<th>May 16</th>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN1516|SEEN1516]]'''</td>
<th>BAD END</th>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN1006|SEEN1006]]'''</td>
</tr>

<tr>
<th>May 17</th>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN1517|SEEN1517]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN4904|SEEN4904]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN1008|SEEN1008]]'''</td>
</tr>

<tr>
<th>May 18</th>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN1518|SEEN1518]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN4999|SEEN4999]]'''</td>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN1009|SEEN1009]]'''</td>
</tr>

<tr>
<th rowspan="9">--</th>
<td rowspan="9" colspan="8"></td>
<th rowspan="9">Misc.<br/>Fragments</th>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN0001|SEEN0001]]'''</td>
</tr>

<tr>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN9030|SEEN9030]]'''</td>
</tr>

<tr>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN9032|SEEN9032]]'''</td>
</tr>

<tr>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN9033|SEEN9033]]'''</td>
</tr>

<tr>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN9034|SEEN9034]]'''</td>
</tr>

<tr>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN9042|SEEN9042]]'''</td>
</tr>

<tr>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN9071|SEEN9071]]'''</td>
</tr>

<tr>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN9074|SEEN9074]]'''</td>
</tr>

<tr>
<td>'''[[Clannad:SEEN9032|SEEN9524]]'''</td>
</tr>

</table>

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Most partials are due to the fact that I'm editing the text as I play through each route/area to have the visual and voice context.  I'm tackling one route at a time.

Currently Route: Kyou

== Re: Thinking about going through a full editing pass for certain routes ==

:Hi Delwack, thank you for your hard work! I've had a quick look through your edits; you have a good grasp on the natural flow of English. Thank you also for your detailed comments (e.g. SEEN0414) -- they do highlight things we've missed before. I apologize that I can't afford the time to join you in editing and discussions just yet, but I'll address your comments one by one when I'm free, from 21 June onward.

:As for route selection, I'm happy with your approach (it's basically what I did myself when I started). Manpower is down, so please continue with what you're able to do (or, you can wait until I'm back, if that will help you to avoid burning out). Just one request: If you change the contents of a line significantly (e.g. line <0287> in SEEN3513), please leave the old line in a comment -- it helps to highlight the lines that need TL checking. Don't worry about what you've already changed though, as we do have a full log of changes.

:I'm hoping for a speedy completion of the project too. There's a possibility of collaborating with Doki Fansubs to accelerate things, but it hasn't been finalised yet.

:Thanks again!
:[[User:Polarem|Polarem]] 13:22, 26 May 2012 (CDT)
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 :Thanks again!
 :[[User:Polarem|Polarem]] 13:22, 26 May 2012 (CDT)
-== Working in a full VN translation team ==
-Hi Delwack, thanks again for your recent efforts. A fansubbing/VN-translation group has offered to put their full weight behind the project, and I have decided to transfer management over to them, and work under them, as I believe this will lead to a much faster completion of the Clannad translation. In light of your enthusiasm for Clannad and the quality of your recent edits, we'd like to invite you to join the team too. Please let me know your answer. If you wish to contact me privately, you can [[Special:EmailUser/Polarem|email me]]