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“if I live until I’m 80, there will be great rejoice”. This line sounds weird I think the last line would make more sense as that would be great.<- I went with that because I didn't find anything better suited. "That would be great" falls short. That would have been "banzai", but here he says "banbanzai", whi is even greater then that. I was trying to make a homage to Monty Python's and the Holy Grail there, but if you find a better suited wording that conveys a meaning of "very overly great", go with that.--[[User:Kemm|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm|talk]]) 16:17, 16 May 2014 (CDT)
 
“if I live until I’m 80, there will be great rejoice”. This line sounds weird I think the last line would make more sense as that would be great.<- I went with that because I didn't find anything better suited. "That would be great" falls short. That would have been "banzai", but here he says "banbanzai", whi is even greater then that. I was trying to make a homage to Monty Python's and the Holy Grail there, but if you find a better suited wording that conveys a meaning of "very overly great", go with that.--[[User:Kemm|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm|talk]]) 16:17, 16 May 2014 (CDT)
:I like how it ended. Thanks.--[[User:Kemm|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm|talk]]) 11:17, 18 May 2014 (CDT)
 
   
 
About the "did'ja" thing: in this passage, she's flustered and speaking more rudely than usual (and usually she's very rude), that's why I originally put it like that. I you could add some extra "rudeness" to her sentences in the last part of this chapter, I'll be very thankful.--[[User:Kemm|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm|talk]]) 16:52, 10 June 2014 (CDT)
 
About the "did'ja" thing: in this passage, she's flustered and speaking more rudely than usual (and usually she's very rude), that's why I originally put it like that. I you could add some extra "rudeness" to her sentences in the last part of this chapter, I'll be very thankful.--[[User:Kemm|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm|talk]]) 16:52, 10 June 2014 (CDT)

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