Editing User talk:Dual Blades
Jump to navigation
Jump to search
Warning: You are not logged in. Your IP address will be publicly visible if you make any edits. If you log in or create an account, your edits will be attributed to your username, along with other benefits.
The edit can be undone. Please check the comparison below to verify that this is what you want to do, and then save the changes below to finish undoing the edit.
Latest revision | Your text | ||
Line 110: | Line 110: | ||
About the "did'ja" thing: in this passage, she's flustered and speaking more rudely than usual (and usually she's very rude), that's why I originally put it like that. I you could add some extra "rudeness" to her sentences in the last part of this chapter, I'll be very thankful.--[[User:Kemm|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm|talk]]) 16:52, 10 June 2014 (CDT) |
About the "did'ja" thing: in this passage, she's flustered and speaking more rudely than usual (and usually she's very rude), that's why I originally put it like that. I you could add some extra "rudeness" to her sentences in the last part of this chapter, I'll be very thankful.--[[User:Kemm|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm|talk]]) 16:52, 10 June 2014 (CDT) |
||
− | :And I selected "nakedness" as a word there because both of them are saying "hadaka" (that means "naked", "nude", "uncovered" and "partially clothed", with no allusion whatsoever to "bodies") and I didn't know a word that would have fitted Meruru (that's why I went with "naked bodies" for her instead of "nudeness" or something like that).--[[User:Kemm|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm|talk]]) 16:56, 10 June 2014 (CDT) |
||
It seems pointless and redundant, but I can't remove it, since that's what it says (or at least, what I think it says, since the wording is a bit obscure)--[[User:Kemm|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm|talk]]) 15:24, 15 June 2014 (CDT) |
It seems pointless and redundant, but I can't remove it, since that's what it says (or at least, what I think it says, since the wording is a bit obscure)--[[User:Kemm|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm|talk]]) 15:24, 15 June 2014 (CDT) |