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== Rakudai Kishi no Eiyuutan ==
 
== Rakudai Kishi no Eiyuutan ==
   
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'''A''' one-in-a-thousand irregular existence
For Rakudai Kishi volume 3 part 12, please review your change from "And also not All Ha●shin-san's partner" to "And also not at all Ha●shin-san's partner". --[[User:KLSymph|KLSymph]] ([[User talk:KLSymph|talk]]) 09:11, 31 January 2015 (CST)
 
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"A" is the appropriate article, not "an", because "a" is used before words that start with a consonant sound, while "an" is used before words that start with a vowel sound. "One" is pronounced with a consonant phoneme (same as "won"), even if it's spelled with a leading vowel.
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Even the weakest of them could be considered '''superhumans'''.
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"Super humans" is strange diction, as using "super" is less formal than the surrounding text. "Superhumans" is not to correct either, admittedly. The best word is probably "superhuman", as an adjective.
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A completely paranormal power that cannot be achieved even with '''(the)''' full mastery of martial arts or weapons.
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"The" is unnecessary. Full mastery is not a particular thing which would take the definite article; the zero article is appropriate.
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Sitting on a leather couch was a beautiful woman in '''(a)''' suited figure.
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This sentence was originally more complicated than it needed to be. It's odd to say that the woman is "sitting in a figure". She embodies the figure; she doesn't sit in it. It's probably better as "in a suit."
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Because Kurogane Ikki only had one tenth the total '''(of)''' mana
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"Of" is unnecessary. There's no need to make "mana" into a prepositional phrase attached to the noun "total" when we can just use "total" as adjective describing "mana".
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[[User:KLSymph|KLSymph]] ([[User talk:KLSymph|talk]]) 18:29, 4 May 2014 (CDT)
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When editing, please put comments and issues you'd like discussed into a talk page, not into the change summary.
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[[User:KLSymph|KLSymph]] ([[User talk:KLSymph|talk]]) 11:02, 22 June 2014 (CDT)
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hey need some help......some guy had put some machine translation in NGNL(V5C4) and I don't know how to change that one to preview so can you do it, since it was gonna get translated by venis....Thanks
 
hey need some help......some guy had put some machine translation in NGNL(V5C4) and I don't know how to change that one to preview so can you do it, since it was gonna get translated by venis....Thanks

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