Editing User talk:Setsuna86

Hi there! I just wanted to drop by your page and say thanks for the translation. It was pretty good (considering speed and quantity; honestly one of the fastest translators I've seen), but the problem in the translations is the fluidity and variety in English. I know you're not a native speaker to English, and your editors don't sound like it either (seriously not trying to insult you; if I did, I'm very sorry). So I was wondering if you [and your editors] would like a compilation on English grammar and sentence structures (quick notes and examples on a document). I think it'll help provide the fluidity in reading it needs (a couple readers felt a little break in smooth reading) and variety in composition. A lot of the description might be repetitive and are oblivious to tone but those are easy to fix. If you feel bothered by any of my comments, don't fret. High school students in America frequently make these mistakes too so it's more than normal to have them occur, especially when you're not a native speaker yourself. If you're interested in my offer just drop by my talk page and ask! Anyway, for such an outgoing translator like you: props! You've worked pretty quickly and your English seems to be progressing pretty well, so I just thought I'd let you know I'm very grateful for your work. Keep up the translations, the community's very thankful for your existence (no pressure intended). [[User:OhHaiThar|OhHaiThar]] ([[User talk:OhHaiThar|talk]])

Yeah I do actually! But I'd actually like to affirm that I'm not offering editing help, but advice from my previous experience as an editor. I actually don't have too much time on me to personally edit myself -although I'm perfectly willing to edit maybe half a chapter to give you an example.I'm sorry if you received my earlier message as am insult/complaint, it was pure criticism; a statement at best would be accurate. If this delayed your release dates in any way because you feel anxious, I apologize. The whole idea of translating and editing is convey a story made up of ideas, and as long as you can bring the main point across (which you have) the translation won't need much work; hell even grammatical errors won't mean shit. Anyway, I really hope that if you do decide to slow down translations and take the time to edit, that your intentions are based on personal drive rather than pressure. It does feel like it needs some work, but it's more than decent enough to enjoy. I'll leave my email adress here: [email protected] [[User:OhHaiThar|OhHaiThar]] ([[User talk:OhHaiThar|talk]]) Edit: Great job on Madan no Ou btw! I just did a quick run through and it looks like you did a very thorough translation! I'd take back all my previous comments if I could after seeing this.