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--[[User:Code-Zero|Code-Zero]] ([[User talk:Code-Zero|talk]]) 06:35, 4 June 2013 (CDT)
 
--[[User:Code-Zero|Code-Zero]] ([[User talk:Code-Zero|talk]]) 06:35, 4 June 2013 (CDT)
   
It's fine. I knew you were who you have said you are. I know that the English anime writers use what you do here as the main structure for the screenplay. I apologize for stepping on your toes. A bad habit of mine. I just prefer a smoother reading style in the descriptive text areas, while certain dialog is mostly better on the single lines as you have, just in certain cases, there is a descriptive of the person saying it, that would read better for continuity, if it was attached to the same line as the spoken dialog. This is similar to the pulp novels (paperback) style of writing, as it keeps the story, and the dialog, flowing, without having to back and forth to see who is speaking. Since it is a translation, and not your original work from the original Japanese, and you have it here on a wiki-style, then I had believed it to be an Open Source Topic-Edit type board. I understand that you are the supervisor of the board, and of course, would not wish to offend you. I believe the work, so far, has been Fuji Mountain sized, to which you have applied yourself quite admirably. Cheers. [[User:The Inventor|The Inventor]] ([[User talk:The Inventor#top|talk]])
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It's fine. I knew you were who you have said you are. I know that the English anime writers use what you do here as the main structure for the screenplay. I apologize for stepping on your toes. A bad habit of mine. I just prefer a smoother reading style in the descriptive text areas, while certain dialog is mostly better on the single lines as you have, just in certain cases, there is a descriptive of the person saying it, that would read better for continuity, if it was attached to the same line as the spoken dialog. This is similar to the pulp novels (paperback) style of writing, as it keeps the story, and the dialog, flowing, without having to back and forth to see who is speaking. Since it is a translation, and not your original work from the original Japanese, and you have it here on a wiki-style, then I had believed it to be an Open Source Topic-Edit type board. I understand that you are the supervisor of the board, and of course, would not wish to offend you. I believe the work, so far, has been Fuji Mountain sized, to which you have applied yourself quite admirably. Cheers.
 
I was reading, where I left off the last time, Part 4, life 2, and saw the difference between this LN and the anime. After he left his first attempt at a contract, in the anime, he encounters the third fallen-angel, a brunette female, long black dress. After she misses with the first bolt and is going for a second, it then that his emotional willpower really kicks in, and he asks for the power to defeat his opponent, and it is then his SG makes its appearance. Here in the LN, this third fallen angle is not introduced yet. I'll keep reading. [[User:The Inventor|The Inventor]] ([[User talk:The Inventor#top|talk]]) 20:21, 8 June 2013 (CDT)
 
 
I seriously dont understand why you tend to keep on doing the same mistake I have been telling you. Please dont break the paragraphs by joining it.
 
--[[User:Code-Zero|Code-Zero]] ([[User talk:Code-Zero|talk]]) 01:03, 12 June 2013 (CDT)
 
 
==block notice==
 
Hello,
 
 
it came to my attention that you were making DxD translator's life harder, despite a lot of explanation attempts.
 
Since I'd rather have them do actual translator work than spending time reverting you, you are now blocked.
 
 
[[User:Darkoneko|DarkoNeko]] <small>[[User_Talk:Darkoneko|talk]]</small> 01:18, 12 June 2013 (CDT)
 
 
== Please change the narration direct / indirect of it..... ==
 
 
"How dare you come in without permission!" She said.
 

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