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==Chapter 1: "Spring"==
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== Chapter 1: "Spring"==
   
 
"Touma!"<br />
 
"Touma!"<br />
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Not taking his eyes off her, he piled up a bunch of books and papers on top of her desk.
 
Not taking his eyes off her, he piled up a bunch of books and papers on top of her desk.
   
"And, this is the one thing you shouldn't forget; the parent-teacher meeting printout. It's starting right next week, so be sure to pass this to your parent."<br />
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"And, this is the one thing you shouldn't forget; the parent-teacher meeting printout. It's going to start right away next week, so be sure to pass this to your parent."<br />
 
"Parent..."<br />
 
"Parent..."<br />
 
"I was hoping to bring this directly to your house, but I had a lot of things come up... sorry about that."<br />
 
"I was hoping to bring this directly to your house, but I had a lot of things come up... sorry about that."<br />
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It had been quite a while since Kazusa had gotten so riled up...
 
It had been quite a while since Kazusa had gotten so riled up...
   
"... all right, never mind. Oh, of course! If you'd like, I could walk you home after school..."<br />
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"... all right, never mind. Oh, of course! If you'd like, I could walk you home after school..."
 
"Don't come near me!"
 
"Don't come near me!"
   
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The students in the music classrooms had seen this sort of episode up until last year, and this year it had also happened without any real motive.
 
The students in the music classrooms had seen this sort of episode up until last year, and this year it had also happened without any real motive.
 
 
As such, she hadn't any idea why she switched to a regular curriculum in the first place.
 
As such, she hadn't any idea why she switched to a regular curriculum in the first place.
   
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She hated the teachers, the students, and pretty much the world around her.
 
She hated the teachers, the students, and pretty much the world around her.
 
 
At the time, she had a reason to hate just about everything she saw.
 
At the time, she had a reason to hate just about everything she saw.
 
 
That's why to Touma Kazusa... she hated the all too friendly male student she met today.
 
That's why to Touma Kazusa... she hated the all too friendly male student she met today.
 
   
 
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There are three music rooms in the School of Houjou University.
 
There are three music rooms in the School of Houjou University.
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This was the same day she chased away the homeroom teacher that led her here, she occupied the room, definitively bearing the name, ''"Problem child that hides behind the donation of a famous parent"''.
 
This was the same day she chased away the homeroom teacher that led her here, she occupied the room, definitively bearing the name, ''"Problem child that hides behind the donation of a famous parent"''.
   
Since then, no one has ever set foot within the room. The grand piano, donated by her mother, was made from a European company worth more than three million yen<ref>Around $30,000 USD</ref>. And yet, it ended up being used by only Kazusa.
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Since then, no one has ever set foot within the room. The grand piano, donated by her mother, was made from a European company worth more than three million yen<ref>Approx. $38,569.13 USD</ref>. And yet, it ended up being used by only Kazusa.
   
 
She never returned the key back to the staff room, only coming and leaving whenever she felt like it, playing any musical instrument inside as she pleased.
 
She never returned the key back to the staff room, only coming and leaving whenever she felt like it, playing any musical instrument inside as she pleased.
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Since the competition two years ago, Kazusa never went on stage.
 
Since the competition two years ago, Kazusa never went on stage.
 
 
Besides, ever since that day, Kazusa stopped playing the piano for leisure.
 
Besides, ever since that day, Kazusa stopped playing the piano for leisure.
   
 
That's why today's practice was not for fun, but merely a habit.
 
That's why today's practice was not for fun, but merely a habit.
 
 
She didn't improve her technique, nor did she notice missing any keys, nor did she lament over her technique worsening, she just kept playing on and on without thinking.
 
She didn't improve her technique, nor did she notice missing any keys, nor did she lament over her technique worsening, she just kept playing on and on without thinking.
   
 
She just played wholeheartedly without any ill will, without any pain, and without any sadness from that day, as if to erase it all.
 
She just played wholeheartedly without any ill will, without any pain, and without any sadness from that day, as if to erase it all.
 
 
At the same time, she erased the fun and happy memories she had, but she hadn't any need to worry about it.
 
At the same time, she erased the fun and happy memories she had, but she hadn't any need to worry about it.
   
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She'd been hearing it for the past several days.
 
She'd been hearing it for the past several days.
 
 
After the practice from the wind instruments and choruses in the first room ended, it seemed like there was someone practicing on their own personal time. But becuase the guitar solo was so off-key, it ruined Kazusa's flow with the piano.
 
After the practice from the wind instruments and choruses in the first room ended, it seemed like there was someone practicing on their own personal time. But becuase the guitar solo was so off-key, it ruined Kazusa's flow with the piano.
   
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As expected, the guitar continued to play ''"WHITE ALBUM"'' with mistakes.
 
As expected, the guitar continued to play ''"WHITE ALBUM"'' with mistakes.
 
 
Kazusa finally decided to close her ears with both her hands, and dash as far away as possible, so as not to hear the noise.
 
Kazusa finally decided to close her ears with both her hands, and dash as far away as possible, so as not to hear the noise.
   
 
Her brain was dead tired on the way home, so she decided to bring it back to health with large quantities of sugar...
 
Her brain was dead tired on the way home, so she decided to bring it back to health with large quantities of sugar...
 
   
 
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Touma Kazusa loved nameraka pudding.
 
Touma Kazusa loved nameraka pudding.
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She wasn't good with spicy food at all ever since she was a kid, and the same held true for bitter, sour, and hot foods. Cold food was exempt from this recently, but in terms of meal choices, this left very little to select from.
 
She wasn't good with spicy food at all ever since she was a kid, and the same held true for bitter, sour, and hot foods. Cold food was exempt from this recently, but in terms of meal choices, this left very little to select from.
   
She'd take ice cream, cake, pudding, lemon tea, milk tea, fruit juice, and carbonated drinks...
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She'd take ice cream, cake, pudding, lemon tea, milk tea, fruit juice and carbonated drinks...
   
 
She would take coffee, but she'd have to put in large amounts of cream and sugar. Otherwise she wouldn't be able to bear the bitter flavor piercing through her throat.
 
She would take coffee, but she'd have to put in large amounts of cream and sugar. Otherwise she wouldn't be able to bear the bitter flavor piercing through her throat.
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"One more, please."<br />
 
"One more, please."<br />
"......... v-very well."
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"......... v, very well."
   
 
Though unrelated, Kazusa was eating two of the nameraka puddings, and had decided on a third.
 
Though unrelated, Kazusa was eating two of the nameraka puddings, and had decided on a third.
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Though she only got half the details right, she did recognize the guy.
 
Though she only got half the details right, she did recognize the guy.
   
"What, thought you could make your move now? That you could get something going on?"<br />
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"What, thought you could make your move now? That you could get something going on?"
"Get something on? I'm all for that!"<br />
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"Get something on? I'm all for that!"
"And if I said my standards weren't so low?"<br />
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"And if I said my standards weren't so low?"
"Even got those words going! I'm all for that!"<br />
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"Even got those words going! I'm all for that!"
"You sure are good, aren't you, Iizuka-kun. I heard plenty of things from Sawa-chan about you."<br />
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"You sure are good, aren't you, Iizuka-kun. I heard plenty of things from Sawa-chan about you."
 
"Want to see if what she's said is true?"
 
"Want to see if what she's said is true?"
   
 
The thin figure, light brown hair, and soft voice made Kazusa recall some not so great memories from the day before.
 
The thin figure, light brown hair, and soft voice made Kazusa recall some not so great memories from the day before.
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At the time when she was heading home thruogh the school gates, there was a guy that was annoying her.
 
At the time when she was heading home through the school gates, there was a guy that was annoying her.
 
   
 
:''"You're Touma-san from class E, right?"''
 
:''"You're Touma-san from class E, right?"''
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:''――He is annoying. Very annoying.''
 
:''――He is annoying. Very annoying.''
   
"A while back he suddenly came to my house, you know? He said he knew it from the address book."
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"See, a while back he suddenly came and was checking the address books and stuff."
   
 
:''――He'd be one to do that sort of thing.''
 
:''――He'd be one to do that sort of thing.''
   
"Weren't you absent from school that day? Or maybe you forgot something at school?"<br />
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"Wasn't he absent from school that day? Or maybe he forgot something."<br />
"Well, I did absent. The day before I went to a live concert as far as the stage."<br />
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"Well, he was. He said the day before he was going to the live concert as far as the stage."<br />
"Isn't that just visiting sick people, then?"<br />
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"That's quite some concern you have."<br />
 
"Still though, doesn't he have any manners?"
 
"Still though, doesn't he have any manners?"
   
 
:''――That's right, he just barges in like it's his own business.''
 
:''――That's right, he just barges in like it's his own business.''
   
"He went in? Or maybe he even went for some tea?"<br />
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"He went in? Or he went for some tea?"<br />
 
"He went home right away... but still."
 
"He went home right away... but still."
   
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"This is my share. I had fun today, later."<br />
 
"This is my share. I had fun today, later."<br />
"W-Wait a second, Iizuka-kun!"
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"W, wait a second, Iizuka-kun!"
   
 
The girl moved to try and stop him, perhaps because she felt the same way.
 
The girl moved to try and stop him, perhaps because she felt the same way.
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:''Really, what is he talking about?''
 
:''Really, what is he talking about?''
:''It's not strange for someone to visit an absent student even though it's only been two weeks since they ended up in the same class?''
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:''It's not strange for someone to check a student that's gone absent even though it's been two weeks since they ended up in the same class, right?''
   
 
"You should know him for at least half a year. Later."<br />
 
"You should know him for at least half a year. Later."<br />
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A fiery flame of humiliation that you couldn't put out with ice or water.
 
A fiery flame of humiliation that you couldn't put out with ice or water.
 
 
And yet again, it was another feeling she carried towards this class representative named ''"Kitahara Haruki"''.
 
And yet again, it was another feeling she carried towards this class representative named ''"Kitahara Haruki"''.
 
   
 
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"Touma!"<br />
 
"Touma!"<br />
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:''... there isn't a single guy around here that has even 1% of that.''
 
:''... there isn't a single guy around here that has even 1% of that.''
   
"If you don't like that, then going with the flow will work better for you."<br />
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"If you don't like that, then going with the flow will work better for you."
 
"What's that mean?"
 
"What's that mean?"
   
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What she was thinking and doing caused an eerie chill down her spine.
 
What she was thinking and doing caused an eerie chill down her spine.
 
 
Because what she was doing was rather typical of a girl, staring at the guy in front of him, and thinking of nothing else.
 
Because what she was doing was rather typical of a girl, staring at the guy in front of him, and thinking of nothing else.
   
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"I......... I see."
 
"I......... I see."
   
:''――This is so stupid. For me to have an interest in someone else,''
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:''――This is so stupid. For me to have an interest in someone else,
:''is so very, very stupid.''
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is so very, very stupid.''
   
 
"Look, I'm done. Take it."<br />
 
"Look, I'm done. Take it."<br />
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"So, please don't mind me if I keep rambling on."<br />
 
"So, please don't mind me if I keep rambling on."<br />
"... huh?"
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"... wha?"
   
 
It should have ended.
 
It should have ended.
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She cursed her foolishness for being even a little kind to such a depressing, overly friendly guy.
 
She cursed her foolishness for being even a little kind to such a depressing, overly friendly guy.
 
   
 
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And over the course of a month, Kazusa slowly came to know some things.
 
And over the course of a month, Kazusa slowly came to know some things.
 
 
That there was a division of two groups of people; those who avoided Kitahara Haruki, and those who relied on him.
 
That there was a division of two groups of people; those who avoided Kitahara Haruki, and those who relied on him.
   
 
For someone like Kazusa who only switched to the regular curriculum this year, it was quite difficult to get a grasp of this. However, it was the conclusion she arrived at after investigating just the school registry.
 
For someone like Kazusa who only switched to the regular curriculum this year, it was quite difficult to get a grasp of this. However, it was the conclusion she arrived at after investigating just the school registry.
 
 
It had nothing to do with gender, grades, or personality. It had to do with the composition of the classes in first and second year.
 
It had nothing to do with gender, grades, or personality. It had to do with the composition of the classes in first and second year.
   
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Those in the latter group were quite distant with him, thought his meddling was rather annoying, and were quite negative with his lecturing. Even so, they became more and more annoyed with him.
 
Those in the latter group were quite distant with him, thought his meddling was rather annoying, and were quite negative with his lecturing. Even so, they became more and more annoyed with him.
 
 
And the former group just gave up from the start, and completely believed in him.
 
And the former group just gave up from the start, and completely believed in him.
   
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They already knew from the beginning when they first stuck with Kitahara.
 
They already knew from the beginning when they first stuck with Kitahara.
 
 
And they just ''"knew"'' who he was.
 
And they just ''"knew"'' who he was.
   
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And then afterwards, a week later when the athletic festival began...
 
And then afterwards, a week later when the athletic festival began...
 
 
On that day, Kazusa learned another thing.
 
On that day, Kazusa learned another thing.
   
 
Skipping all of the events, she killed time in the second music room, watching from the window into the evening view of the campus...
 
Skipping all of the events, she killed time in the second music room, watching from the window into the evening view of the campus...
 
 
Third year students were carrying drinks onto the grounds after the festival had ended.
 
Third year students were carrying drinks onto the grounds after the festival had ended.
   
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Because she was the one people needed the least.
 
Because she was the one people needed the least.
   
Because she was the only outsider that observed the athletic festival and that incident.
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Because she was the only outsider that observed the atheltic festival and that incident.
   
 
And......... because she was the one girl who watched Kitahara Haruki the most.
 
And......... because she was the one girl who watched Kitahara Haruki the most.
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She was rather optimistic at this point...
 
She was rather optimistic at this point...
 
   
 
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"Good morning, Touma! Also, happy birthday!"<br />
 
"Good morning, Touma! Also, happy birthday!"<br />
 
"?!"<br />
 
"?!"<br />
"It's today, right? May 28?"<br />
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"It's today, right? May 21?"<br />
 
"........."<br />
 
"........."<br />
 
"Happy birthday! Well, I'm in April, so as an older guy I can't really say much."<br />
 
"Happy birthday! Well, I'm in April, so as an older guy I can't really say much."<br />
 
".........!"
 
".........!"
   
She decided to run away in haste, since being called like that on such a day would make her desperately want to scream in anger with something like, ''"W-W-Where the hell did you figure that out, you damn stalker?!"''
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She decided to run away in haste, since being called like that on such a day would make her desperately want to scream in anger with something like, ''"W, w, where the hell did you figure that out, you damn stalker?!"''
   
 
A few days afterward, Kitahara would also greet people on their birthdays. They took the same attitude that Kazusa figured they would, and she was glad from the bottom of her heart that she didn't suddenly speak in such a weird, overly self-conscious manner.
 
A few days afterward, Kitahara would also greet people on their birthdays. They took the same attitude that Kazusa figured they would, and she was glad from the bottom of her heart that she didn't suddenly speak in such a weird, overly self-conscious manner.
   
 
So relieved she'd almost send the classroom garbage can flying with a kick.
 
So relieved she'd almost send the classroom garbage can flying with a kick.
 
   
 
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Standing out like that though, she couldn't ignore him no matter how much he spoke to her. Kazusa couldn't go on like she always did.
 
Standing out like that though, she couldn't ignore him no matter how much he spoke to her. Kazusa couldn't go on like she always did.
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"This is the result for treating her like this all the time! Touma's no longer a music or scholar student! She's a regular maggot now!"<br />
 
"This is the result for treating her like this all the time! Touma's no longer a music or scholar student! She's a regular maggot now!"<br />
"I-I see..."<br />
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"I, I see..."<br />
 
"........."
 
"........."
   
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Kazusa's resentment for the horrible middle-aged teacher only grew with his jabs, his overbearing attitude, and his faultfinding point of view.
 
Kazusa's resentment for the horrible middle-aged teacher only grew with his jabs, his overbearing attitude, and his faultfinding point of view.
   
"And besides, you enrolled in this school because of your piano skills. You should never have given up and switched curriculum!"<br />
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"And besides, you enrolled in this school because of your piano skills. You should never have given up and switched curriculums!"<br />
 
"It doesn't matter if I go to university, does it? If you're not really interested in our money, then..."<br />
 
"It doesn't matter if I go to university, does it? If you're not really interested in our money, then..."<br />
 
"! Is that the attitude of a student?!"
 
"! Is that the attitude of a student?!"
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:''――Is that the attitude of a priest?!''
 
:''――Is that the attitude of a priest?!''
   
"S-Suwa-sensei... let's just leave it at this for today. Touma also seems like she'll reflect on this."<br />
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"S, Suwa-sensei... let's just leave it at this for today. Touma also seems like she'll reflect on this."<br />
 
"Is this the attitude of someone who'll reflect on this?!"
 
"Is this the attitude of someone who'll reflect on this?!"
   
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"...!"
 
"...!"
   
:''I had just gotten things to an atmosphere I really wanted, and yet this guy who doesn't look at people's faces, doesn't know when to keep quiet, and doesn't think about anything at all just waltzes in here.''
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:''I had just gotten things to an atmosphere I really wanted, and yet this guy who doesn't look at people's faces, doesn't know when to keep quiet, and doesn't think about anything at all just waltzes in here.
:''Today was the closing ceremony, so I'm sure the students should have headed home...''
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Today was the closing ceremony, so I'm sure the students should have headed home...''
   
 
"What'd they say? It looks like it took quite a long time..."<br />
 
"What'd they say? It looks like it took quite a long time..."<br />
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From a special honors student to a particularly terrible student.
 
From a special honors student to a particularly terrible student.
 
 
The teachers, the classmates, the class representative...
 
The teachers, the classmates, the class representative...
   
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When she shot such a cold look at him, his expression soon changed, and she looked ahead of him, like there was no one.
 
When she shot such a cold look at him, his expression soon changed, and she looked ahead of him, like there was no one.
   
"A-Ah... Tou, ma?"
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"A, ah... Tou, ma?"
   
 
Kitahara stood there, only able to see her walk off.
 
Kitahara stood there, only able to see her walk off.
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Even Kazusa didn't know whether the words she mumbled were pointed at him, or herself.
 
Even Kazusa didn't know whether the words she mumbled were pointed at him, or herself.
 
   
 
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That day in the second music room, she started going on a rather harsh recital.
 
That day in the second music room, she started going on a rather harsh recital.
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It was selfish practice that had no kind of harmony, and while it continued to miss notes, it'd always cut into her performance. It wouldn't stop if she did, and would just interrupt if she continued.
 
It was selfish practice that had no kind of harmony, and while it continued to miss notes, it'd always cut into her performance. It wouldn't stop if she did, and would just interrupt if she continued.
 
 
Even though it was quite a bother, there wasn't a time that she had merely let it continue to play here at all.
 
Even though it was quite a bother, there wasn't a time that she had merely let it continue to play here at all.
   
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However... at the moment, this quiet noise was the only thing Touma Kazusa didn't hate.
 
However... at the moment, this quiet noise was the only thing Touma Kazusa didn't hate.
   
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