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A long pause followed.
 
A long pause followed.
   
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The air so thin between the two, that even a mosquito could break it.
The atmosphere between was so stifling that it could have easily suffocated any bugs in the vicinity.
 
   
 
She gazed at Saito's face… and nodded as if convinced.
 
She gazed at Saito's face… and nodded as if convinced.
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Pretending to be busy, Saito looked around.
 
Pretending to be busy, Saito looked around.
   
Seemed like the others were not having too much of a peaceful time either.
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Seems like the others were not having too much of a peaceful time either.
   
 
Agnes was doing something absent-mindedly, distracting herself from her worries. Tiffania, who was sitting on a chair, was tightly grasping her fists. Louise was sitting, biting her fingernails and occasionally throwing irritated looks in their direction.
 
Agnes was doing something absent-mindedly, distracting herself from her worries. Tiffania, who was sitting on a chair, was tightly grasping her fists. Louise was sitting, biting her fingernails and occasionally throwing irritated looks in their direction.
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“Nothing…”
 
“Nothing…”
   
Saito replied as he shook his head. As he was extremely nervous, he felt that his throat was very dry and he would like a drink.
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Saito shook his head. The tension from inside felt dry.
   
 
When Saito approached, Louise started to tremble.
 
When Saito approached, Louise started to tremble.
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Louise breathed heavily while trembling.
 
Louise breathed heavily while trembling.
   
She couldn’t even make a sound any more. One should say, such an exceedingly large dimension was mortifying. When a person sees an overwhelming existence, it is said that he or she is at a loss for words. This was what was happening to Louise right now. Just like when she met a Familiar of Void who introduced herself as Myoznitnirn, the impact was huge.
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She couldn’t even make a sound any more. One should say, such an exceedingly large dimension was mortifying. When a person sees an overwhelming existence, one says that he or she is at a loss for words. This is what was happening to Louise right now. Just like when she met a Familiar of Void who introduced herself as Myoznitnirn, the impact was huge.
   
 
The world is wide. It exceeded Louise's imagination by far.
 
The world is wide. It exceeded Louise's imagination by far.
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''I-I am cute…''
 
''I-I am cute…''
   
She tried to persuade herself. After all, even after she showed her breasts, Saito didn’t choose Tiffania or the housemaid, right?
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She tried to persuade herself. After all, even after she showed her breasts, Saito didn’t choose Tiffania nor the housemaid, right?
   
 
Even thinking this, all her feelings withered.
 
Even thinking this, all her feelings withered.

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