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==Translation Questions==
 
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:An involuntarily raised voiced by Kamito, the young girl beating him from head to toe.
 
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Ah aehm, can it be that it should have been: ''The involuntary raised voice of the girl is beating Kamito from head to toe.'' ? --[[User:Darklor|Darklor]] 06:29, 15 February 2012 (CST)
 
Ah aehm, can it be that it should have been: ''The involuntary raised voice of the girl is beating Kamito from head to toe.'' ? --[[User:Darklor|Darklor]] 06:29, 15 February 2012 (CST)
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:Deep inside the office, a displease voice.
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Can it be that there is a "''heard''" missing? --[[User:Darklor|Darklor]] 06:34, 15 February 2012 (CST)

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Translation Questions

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An involuntarily raised voiced by Kamito, the young girl beating him from head to toe.

Shouldnt that be: With an involuntary raised voice against Kamito... ? --Darklor 04:06, 15 February 2012 (CST)

No, its more like Kamito was been hit because of what he said to the girl.... the "Black" as in the color of her underwear. --Black Dust

And she shouted at him too? --Darklor 06:24, 15 February 2012 (CST)

Ah aehm, can it be that it should have been: The involuntary raised voice of the girl is beating Kamito from head to toe. ? --Darklor 06:29, 15 February 2012 (CST)

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Deep inside the office, a displease voice.

Can it be that there is a "heard" missing? --Darklor 06:34, 15 February 2012 (CST)