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"The large frame of the beast greatly sprung up in a jolt, and it let out a death agony roar and became silent." Well, "death agony roar" sounded a bit awkward, would it better that we rephrase it, though I get the point that the roar was expressing the idea of its agony and imminent death. Thanks for the translation as always :D. [[User:Zakashi|Zakashi]] ([[User talk:Zakashi|talk]]) 05:33, 14 August 2012 (CDT) |
"The large frame of the beast greatly sprung up in a jolt, and it let out a death agony roar and became silent." Well, "death agony roar" sounded a bit awkward, would it better that we rephrase it, though I get the point that the roar was expressing the idea of its agony and imminent death. Thanks for the translation as always :D. [[User:Zakashi|Zakashi]] ([[User talk:Zakashi|talk]]) 05:33, 14 August 2012 (CDT) |
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I'll mark all the words that's しっかり, and then you give me your opinion. There's the other where she goes "If I don't しっかり, I can't be an example" or something. -----Unexpected thing or people unexpectedly coming by--[[User:KuroiHikari|KuroiHikari]] ([[User_talk:KuroiHikari|Talk]] | ) 04:59, 26 August 2012 (CDT) |
I'll mark all the words that's しっかり, and then you give me your opinion. There's the other where she goes "If I don't しっかり, I can't be an example" or something. -----Unexpected thing or people unexpectedly coming by--[[User:KuroiHikari|KuroiHikari]] ([[User_talk:KuroiHikari|Talk]] | ) 04:59, 26 August 2012 (CDT) |
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| + | "If I don't しっかり, I can't be an example" Hmm. I have an idea of what goes there. But I'd need the j-text for the whole line as well as your translation of it. Then I can compare both our knowledge and tell for sure. [[User:Zero2001|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001|Talk]] - 07:05, 26 August 2012 (CDT) |
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== Scarlet? == |
== Scarlet? == |
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Revision as of 14:05, 26 August 2012
Translation problems
Hi, just asking about a small part,
"The large frame of the beast greatly sprung up in a jolt, and it let out a death agony roar and became silent." Well, "death agony roar" sounded a bit awkward, would it better that we rephrase it, though I get the point that the roar was expressing the idea of its agony and imminent death. Thanks for the translation as always :D. Zakashi (talk) 05:33, 14 August 2012 (CDT)
At first, it was "a roar of death agony" but that sounded weird too, I'm kind of lazy on this kind of stuff =P, so I'll leave it up too you =) --KuroiHikari (Talk | ) 06:13, 14 August 2012 (CDT)
Haha, well, I tried to rephrase it to the best of my abilities, shall leave it to other editors to look into it and improve it. =P Zakashi (talk) 06:20, 14 August 2012 (CDT)
"Agonized death roar" would be the correct form. Zero2001 - Talk - 06:20, 14 August 2012 (CDT)
Well, if you think it is more apt, please do change it, I kind of deviated from the original form of phrasing used :). Zakashi (talk) 06:26, 14 August 2012 (CDT)
What is "Unh"? Confirmatory/Agreement sound? Zero2001 - Talk - 11:44, 24 August 2012 (CDT)
A grunt of annoyance? It's the mu part む、とカミトを恨めしそうに睨みながらうなずいた。 I'm guessing it btw
舞いこむ事件を片付けているだけで、すぐに午後になってしまった。 I was going to relook into this, but later --KuroiHikari (Talk | ) 19:18, 24 August 2012 (CDT)
しっかり (Shikkari) = tightly, steady, firm, firmly, securely. When used in describing someone then it means soemone sho is firm, in control of her self, etc, I think. Shikkari is also used in sentences to tell someone to "get a hold of [themselves]", "calm down", etc. Also, here are some synonyms of "reliable". Go through them, you might find something that fits. Zero2001 - Talk - 00:16, 26 August 2012 (CDT)
舞いこむ is plainly of this meaning: 思いもかけないものや人が、ひょっこり入りこむ --KuroiHikari (Talk | ) 02:26, 26 August 2012 (CDT)
I don't get it fully. Can you try and explain in english? Zero2001 - Talk - 04:03, 26 August 2012 (CDT)
Ah しっかり (shikkari) as in the manner of ojou-sama. in that case "proper" or "prim and proper" would be better choices. These words fit the circumstances perfectly. Zero2001 - Talk - 04:19, 26 August 2012 (CDT)
I'll mark all the words that's しっかり, and then you give me your opinion. There's the other where she goes "If I don't しっかり, I can't be an example" or something. -----Unexpected thing or people unexpectedly coming by--KuroiHikari (Talk | ) 04:59, 26 August 2012 (CDT)
"If I don't しっかり, I can't be an example" Hmm. I have an idea of what goes there. But I'd need the j-text for the whole line as well as your translation of it. Then I can compare both our knowledge and tell for sure. Zero2001 - Talk - 07:05, 26 August 2012 (CDT)
Scarlet?
It or She? --KuroiHikari (Talk | ) 03:56, 26 August 2012 (CDT)
Unknown. Zero2001 - Talk - 04:19, 26 August 2012 (CDT)
Oh, I was just asking for suggestion, but I'm not sure if I was consistent here. --KuroiHikari (Talk | ) 04:59, 26 August 2012 (CDT)
