Talk:Ousama Game

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I'd like to help!

I'm not sure what it is about this series, but I'm already loving it. Although, I do have one small problem. The end product is, well, a little hard to read, to say the least. The vocabulary is quite out there, a lot of the words felt too big, and too unnecessary. The usual tense errors were there (Mostly [Held] - [Hold]), and there were some sentences where things just.. didn't make much sense.

I just did the massive clean-up of the Volume 1 Chapter 4; and I was thinking, this doesn't look too hard. Maybe I could do this for the rest of the series?

I'm quite new to this, but I have a great understanding of English (Well, it is my native language) and plenty of time on my hands now that I'm on holidays, and if it goes well, I could fit this in to my regular schedule and do this all year.

Anyway, tl;dr, I want to help with Editing/Proofreading, are there any open spots?

MystiKnight (talk) 07:50, 22 December 2012 (CST)