Talk:Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei:Volume 1

(Suggestion: for 'the fluctuations of Psion wave motions reflect the growth of the physical body, such as changes as a result of age, and be subsequently effected', it may be appropriate to change 'effected' to 'affected'. It may also be appropriate to change 'be' to 'are'. Alternatively, it would be most effective to check the original passage in order to grasp the intended meaning.) *happily rereads parts of the first volume* -Multipartite (talk) 14:00, 23 March 2013 (CDT)