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^ That wasn't even a hard sentence >< [[User:Vanant|Vanant]] ([[User talk:Vanant|talk]]) 20:31, 27 July 2014 (CDT) |
^ That wasn't even a hard sentence >< [[User:Vanant|Vanant]] ([[User talk:Vanant|talk]]) 20:31, 27 July 2014 (CDT) |
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| − | In the dark, that person while brandishing a kind of stake in his hand, While moving the foot of four, without a sound, run over here |
+ | In the dark, that person while brandishing a kind of stake in his hand, While moving the foot of four, without a sound, run over here with tremendous speed. |
| + | My suggestion would be: In the darkness, that person was brandishing a kind of stake in his hand. Then, while moving its four feet, without a sound, ran over here with tremendous speed |
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| − | with tremendous speed. |
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| + | This could probably be improved on so just going to leave my suggestion here. ([[User talk:Marrow|talk]]) 14:06, 28 July 2014 (CDT) |
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| − | My suggestion would be: In the darkness, that person was brandishing a kind of stake in his hand. Then, while moving its four feet, |
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| − | This could probably be improved on so just going to leave my suggestion here. [[User:Marrow|Marrow]] ([[User talk:Marrow|talk]]) 14:06, 28 July 2014 (CDT) |
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== Response == |
== Response == |
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Revision as of 20:32, 29 July 2014
Mushoku Tensei
Dear Ren,
You are certainly welcomed to join the project,
please check the Mushoku Tensei Registration page and simply sign your username on an unoccupied and unregistered chapter.
You are also more then welcome to help proof read and check our existing scripts.
I look forward to seeing your contribution to the project and thank you for helping to bring this web/light novel to the community.
Best Regards,
Onizuka-GTO 20:26, 24 July 2014 (CDT)
アスラの貴族は婚姻となればパーティでもやるのだろうが、式というものは聞いたこともない。 is not 'Even if a noble of Asura was to do it at a party and if it becomes a marriage, but I've never heard such a thing even as an expression.' but 'Nobles of Asura throw parties once they get married, but I've never heard of them holding something like a wedding ceremony.'
My advice? Stop machine translating and use the lingua lexica subforum.--Hayashi s (talk) 08:50, 26 July 2014 (CDT)
^ That wasn't even a hard sentence >< Vanant (talk) 20:31, 27 July 2014 (CDT)
Possible Edits By Chapter
Volume 10 Chapter 1
Volume 10 Chapter 2
In the dark, that person while brandishing a kind of stake in his hand, While moving the foot of four, without a sound, run over here with tremendous speed.
My suggestion would be: In the darkness, that person was brandishing a kind of stake in his hand. Then, while moving its four feet, without a sound, ran over here with tremendous speed
This could probably be improved on so just going to leave my suggestion here. (talk) 14:06, 28 July 2014 (CDT)
Response
Yeah feel free, I'm pretty much on a two week break from college at the moment, so I've got some extra time to edit. If you want editing
for a specific chapter let me know and I'll focus on that, though all my edits will be minor edits since I'm not familiar with Japanese.
If I have any questions or suggestions, would you prefer them listed here like the above or on the discussion page of the chapter? Marrow (talk) 12:54, 29 July 2014 (CDT)
