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" Come to think of it, since when can't I see the sun? " |
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Wording seems confusing to me (and I don't want to change the meaning) Is he trying to say "When was the last time I saw the sun?" or "why can't I see the sun?"? Getting more intense by the chapter. |
Wording seems confusing to me (and I don't want to change the meaning) Is he trying to say "When was the last time I saw the sun?" or "why can't I see the sun?"? Getting more intense by the chapter. |
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| + | Also, would it be more dramatic to drop contraction's on some sentences? Like "There IS no one in the classroom" instead of "There's". |
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Revision as of 03:34, 1 February 2010
" Come to think of it, since when can't I see the sun? " Wording seems confusing to me (and I don't want to change the meaning) Is he trying to say "When was the last time I saw the sun?" or "why can't I see the sun?"? Getting more intense by the chapter. Also, would it be more dramatic to drop contraction's on some sentences? Like "There IS no one in the classroom" instead of "There's". -SwiftStrike
