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"I can learn ''so much'' from watching a certain someone. For example, there's nothing as sickening as egocentric obstinacy," Daiya says without flinching while looking into Asami's eyes.
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"I can learn ''so much'' by watching a certain person. For example, there's nothing as sickening as obstinacy grounded upon selfishness," Daiya says without flinching as he looks straight into Asami's eyes.
   
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"...are you picking a fight with me?"
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"...Are you picking a fight with me?"
   
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"You think that I'm talking about you? Does that mean that you were aware of your self-centered behavior? Looks like you're beyond hope, huh."
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"Oh? So you were aware of your self-centered behavior? Looks like you're beyond hope!"
   
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"Hey...! Watch your mouth...!"<!--EEE: I’m assuming this is supposed to sound casual, and not formal? That is, old version wasn’t erroneous - just stiff…-grrarr-->
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"How... How dare you...!"
  
   
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I wonder why Daiya has to be like this to each and every person...
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I wonder why Daiya has to treat every single person like that...
   
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"Hahaha! He’s just trying to warn you that hovering over Maria-chan might annoy her!"<!--EEE: were you thinking of transposing “off-putting” here? Alternatively, “annoy her” if “piss her off” seems too vulgar-grrarr--><!-- well, just meant to say that she might be, well, put off, annoyed, disgusted, when someone keeps following her. Piss off works well, but yeah, might be a tad bit too vulgar. -EEE --> Haruaki says, trying to smooth over the conflict. Let’s set aside how successful he is...<!--libedit-grrarr-->
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"Hahaha! He's just wants to give you a piece of advice because hovering over Maria-chan might put you out of favor with her!" Haruaki goes to Daiya's rescue, though it's questionable whether that effect was achieved.
  
   
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"Hands off! And stop calling her with that over-friendly 'chan,' you idiot!" Asami-san roars when Haruaki puts on a strangely soft smile and starts patting her head, "Don't treat me like a child just because I'm short! And stop touching me!"
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"Shut up! And stop calling her 'chan,' you dope!" Asami-san roars as Haruaki starts patting her head with an oddly soft smile. "Don't think you can treat me like a child just because I'm short! And stop touching me!"
   
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Haruaki, however, ignores her protests and continues patting her hair.
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However, Haruaki ignores her protests and continues to pat her head.
   
 
"Hah... this guy just won't listen..."
  
"Hah... this guy just won't listen..."
   
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"Yeah, I won't listen no matter what you say!"
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"Hell yeah! I won't listen no matter what you say!"
   
 
"That's nothing to brag about..."
  
"That's nothing to brag about..."
   
   
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Suddenly, I notice that someone is gazing at those three. Miyazawa-kun, our class committee chairman, is watching them with a sour face.
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Suddenly, I notice that someone is staring at those three people. Miyazaki-kun, our class president, is watching them with a sour look.
   
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He moves his gaze to me and says expressionlessly, "Always having a lot of fun, aren't you guys? Good for you."
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He shifts his gaze toward me and blankly says: "Always enjoying yourselves, aren't you? Good for you guys."
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'''Ryuu Miyazaki''':<br />
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The president of Kazuki's class. He is considered to be a reliable and exemplary student.<!--mild improvement, w/ unavoidable meaning drift from implied “person” to explicit “student”- can tweak more if meaning drift is excessive-grrarr-->
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'''Daiya Oomine''':<br />
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An unrestrained and volatile friend of Kazuki's who has silver-dyed hair and several piercings. He is shrewd and can be depended on in a pinch. He and Kokone Kirino are childhood friends.<!--libedit-grrarr-->
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'''Haruaki Usui''':<br />
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A cheerful but frivolous baseball ace. In spite of his playful nature, he can get very worked up when it comes to his friends.
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'''Riko Asami''':<br />
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One of Maria Otonashi's numerous fans that have emerged after the entrance ceremony. She is stubborn but cheerful.<!-- I don't have her in mind as very cheerful, though... --><!--yeah, no kidding- captioning fail on part of original JP magazine staff? It’s like those back cover blurbs for books that are totally off/demonstrate that someone at the publisher’s totally dropped the ball. Or…irony? :P-grrarr--><!-- That's why I never read the outlines on the back! HAHA...haha... Anyway, who knows, maybe she's a happy girl between the lines, when she's alone with Maria? -EEE --><!--Hah...you have a ... charitable interpretation there, I think :P -grrarr-->

Latest revision as of 23:47, 31 March 2013

"I can learn so much by watching a certain person. For example, there's nothing as sickening as obstinacy grounded upon selfishness," Daiya says without flinching as he looks straight into Asami's eyes.

"...Are you picking a fight with me?"

"Oh? So you were aware of your self-centered behavior? Looks like you're beyond hope!"

"Hey...! Watch your mouth...!"

I wonder why Daiya has to treat every single person like that...

"Hahaha! He’s just trying to warn you that hovering over Maria-chan might annoy her!" Haruaki says, trying to smooth over the conflict. Let’s set aside how successful he is...

"Shut up! And stop calling her 'chan,' you dope!" Asami-san roars as Haruaki starts patting her head with an oddly soft smile. "Don't think you can treat me like a child just because I'm short! And stop touching me!"

However, Haruaki ignores her protests and continues to pat her head.

"Hah... this guy just won't listen..."

"Hell yeah! I won't listen no matter what you say!"

"That's nothing to brag about..."


Suddenly, I notice that someone is staring at those three people. Miyazaki-kun, our class president, is watching them with a sour look.

He shifts his gaze toward me and blankly says: "Always enjoying yourselves, aren't you? Good for you guys."


Ryuu Miyazaki:
The president of Kazuki's class. He is considered to be a reliable and exemplary student.


Daiya Oomine:
An unrestrained and volatile friend of Kazuki's who has silver-dyed hair and several piercings. He is shrewd and can be depended on in a pinch. He and Kokone Kirino are childhood friends.


Haruaki Usui:
A cheerful but frivolous baseball ace. In spite of his playful nature, he can get very worked up when it comes to his friends.


Riko Asami:
One of Maria Otonashi's numerous fans that have emerged after the entrance ceremony. She is stubborn but cheerful.

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