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(I think I put brackets because I was considering rewriting that part. The two lines are sort of connected but I can't seem to transfer it well into English unless I break up the sentence,) |
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| − | This line is very casual. It feels like it should be one of Ryuuji's thoughts. Are the internal thoughts of the characters distinctly marked in the original version? |
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| − | "Eventually, she was clenching her teeth where her front teeth were visibly chattering," |
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| − | Not a clear sentence. she can't really clench and have her teeth chatter at the same time. |
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| − | [[User:Akirasav|Akirasav]] 20:08, 28 September 2008 (PDT) |
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