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I think I put brackets because I was considering rewriting that part. The two lines are sort of connected but I can't seem to transfer it well into English unless I break up the sentence,
 
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"Well, that’s because it really is seaweed…"


This line is very casual. It feels like it should be one of Ryuuji's thoughts. Are the internal thoughts of the characters distinctly marked in the original version?
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"Eventually, she was clenching her teeth where her front teeth were visibly chattering,"
Not a clear sentence.  she can't really clench and have her teeth chatter at the same time.
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Also, what's the difference between the "* * *" and the  separations without 3 stars.
[[User:Akirasav|Akirasav]] 20:08, 28 September 2008 (PDT)

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