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The phone disconnected.
I end the call.




My heart beat didn't seem to calm down a bit, so I dived into my bed and buried my head in the pillow.
Unable to calm the throbbing of my heart, I dive into bed and bury my head in my pillow.


"What should I do... What should I do what should I do!!"
"What am I... What am I supposed to do now!" I yell into the pillow as I furiously kick my legs up and down.


I talked into the pillow and shook around.
I don't dislike him. Otherwise, I wouldn't be so troubled right now.


It's not like I don't like him. If I didn't, then I wouldn't be troubled to begin with.
I considered him a friend; I had drawn a distinct line in my head.


But I considered him a friend. In my mind I had already drawn a distinct line.
But that's no longer enough for Kazu-kun...?


So Kazu-kun won't allow this anymore...?
He should have said something sooner, before our friendship had grown so strong. Now, those bonds are so tight that they’ll hurt when they break.<!--v libedit-grrarr-->


In that case, he should have said it earlier. He should have said it before our current relationship would break and get bitter.
Why did he have to speak out after staying silent for so long...?<!--libedit-grrarr-->


Why does he say it so late...?


 
Saying that he loves me...
To say he'd love me.
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The phone disconnected.
I end the call.
 
 
I sat on the cushion and held my head.
 
I have no idea how I should react.


"......gh!"


It's not like I didn't consider this possibility, since we're male and female.
I sit down on a cushion with my head in my hands<!--libedit-grrarr-->, at a complete loss as to how to respond.<!--EEE: Arrg, sorry - extraneous "and" grrarr-->


But nonetheless, I was convinced without foundation that this wouldn't happen with Kazuki.
"......tch!"


This lack of consideration might have hurt him.
I know people always say that men and women can never be just friends<!--EEE: fyi, very liberal edit -grrarr-->; nevertheless, I was naïve enough to believe that nothing would happen with Kazuki.


Why? It would be the best to feel nothing for me at all.
Perhaps I’ve been tormenting him all along by failing to properly understand how he felt.


Despite this, why of all things did he get captured by this foolish feeling?
But why? It’d be best if he felt nothing at all toward me, yet he got trapped by the silliest of all feelings!




To say he'd love me.
Saying that he loves me!
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<div style="border: 2px solid #220022; z-index: 2;background: #660066; padding: 3px; color: #EE0; width: 200px; font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><span style="font-size: 1.5em;">Kirino Kokone</span><br />
<div style="border: 2px solid #220022; z-index: 2;background: #660066; padding: 3px; color: #EE0; width: 200px; font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><span style="font-size: 1.5em;">Kokone Kirino</span><br />
One of Kazuki's friends; bright, social and popular with the class. She is childhood friend of Daiya Oomine since kindergarten, and...?
One of Kazuki's friends; bright, sociable and popular. She’s been Daiya Oomine’s friend since kindergarten, but there’s something more to their current relationship…<!--EEE:the and…? part seems a bit…Engrishy?-grrarr--><!-- Good point. Maybe something à la "[...], which has left them as...?" would be better, but doesn't really fix the essential problem. -EEE --><!--EEE: hm. how's this? if not, I can come up w/... something else ...? :D-grrarr--><!-- How about something like "and/but/so there seems to be more to their relationship"? -EEE --><!--I like that - also need to make it more clear that they’re friends before that-grrarr-->
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Latest revision as of 22:01, 31 March 2013

I end the call.


Unable to calm the throbbing of my heart, I dive into bed and bury my head in my pillow.

"What am I... What am I supposed to do now!" I yell into the pillow as I furiously kick my legs up and down.

I don't dislike him. Otherwise, I wouldn't be so troubled right now.

I considered him a friend; I had drawn a distinct line in my head.

But that's no longer enough for Kazu-kun...?

He should have said something sooner, before our friendship had grown so strong. Now, those bonds are so tight that they’ll hurt when they break.

Why did he have to speak out after staying silent for so long...?


Saying that he loves me...

I end the call.


I sit down on a cushion with my head in my hands, at a complete loss as to how to respond.

"......tch!"

I know people always say that men and women can never be just friends; nevertheless, I was naïve enough to believe that nothing would happen with Kazuki.

Perhaps I’ve been tormenting him all along by failing to properly understand how he felt.

But why? It’d be best if he felt nothing at all toward me, yet he got trapped by the silliest of all feelings!


Saying that he loves me!


Kokone Kirino

One of Kazuki's friends; bright, sociable and popular. She’s been Daiya Oomine’s friend since kindergarten, but there’s something more to their current relationship…

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