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| "Ohh…as Ryuuji ran scared, the one who had the courage to intervene,"
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| 'ran scared' doesn't make too much sense. Did he 'run away scared'? Though I think 'froze up' or 'panicked' makes more sense in the context of the story.
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| Also, is the narrator saying 'Ohh'? It seems more like a character is saying it and consequently should be in quotes. Thanks.
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| [[User:Akirasav|Akirasav]] 16:02, 22 September 2008 (PDT)
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| Oops, I thought 'ran scared' had a different meaning, like wanting to run away or something. And the 'Ohh' is coming from Ryuuji and he's probably just thinking that to himself.
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| I guess it's more like "''Ohh''...As Ryuuji fearfully prepared to run away, the one who had the courage to intervene was,"
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| [[User:Trabius|Trabius]] 17:33, 22 September 2008 (PDT)
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