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"Who are you?"
"Who are you?"
The girl who looked into Saito's face steadly said, with the blue sky which look like it will fall out behind her.
The girl looked into Saito's face steadily said, with the blue sky which seemed like it would fall out behind her.
She looks like about Saito's age.
She looked like around Saito's age and she wore a white blouse with a grau pleated skirt under a black cape. She crouched down, looking in to his face as if she was disgusted.
She is wore a white blouse, a grau pleated skirt under black cape. She stoop down and is looking in to his face as if she has been disgusted.


Her face is... cute. Her eyes of reddish brown dances as her strawberry blond hair and her white flawless skin for a stage.
Her face is... cute. Her eyes of reddish brown danced, with her strawberry blond hair and her white flawless skin for a stage.
She seems like a foreighner. Well... she is. She is a such a cute foreigner girl like a doll. Or is she a half?
She seems like a foreigner, Well... she is. But she is such a cute foreigner girl, like a doll. Or is she a half?


Anyway her uniform, I wonder which school it belongs to. I have never seen it before.
Anyway her uniform, I wonder which school it belongs to? I have never seen it before.
Saito seems to be llie on his back in the ground. He lift his head up to look around.
Saito seems to lie on his back on the ground, he lifted his head up to look around.


There are a lot of people with black cape looking at him as a stranger.
There were a lot of people with black cape looking at him as a stranger.
A rich grassy plain is there endlessly.
There, an endlessly rich grassy plain, he finds a huge castle, with stone walls in the distance just like he has seen in those European trip photograph.
He finds a huge castle made with stone walls in distance just like he has seen in a European trip photograph.
This was just like a fantasy.
This is just like a fantasy.




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"Who am I...? I'm Saito Hiraga"
"Who am I...? I'm Saito Hiraga"
"which commoner are you from?"
"which commoner are you from?"
A commoner? What is that. Everyone around him holds stick in their hands and wearing the same uniform as she is.
A commoner? What is that. Everyone around him are holding stick in their hands and wearing the same uniform as she is.
Did I get lost in American school or something?
Did I get lost in an American school or something?
"Louise, what are you going to do calling a commoner at the =Summon Servent=?"
"Louise, what are you going to do calling a commoner at the =Summon Servant=?"
When someone said that, everyone but her who is looking into his face started to laugh.
When someone said that, everyone but her who was looking into his face started to laugh.
"I... I just made little mistake!"
"I... I just made little mistake!"
A girl front of Saito shouted in a refined voice to carry like a bell.
A girl front of Saito shouted in a refined voice that carried like a bell.
"What are you talking about a mistake? That's your usual"
"What are you talking about a mistake? That's your usual"
"Of course! after all she is Louise of Zero"
"Of course! after all she is Zero Louise"
When someone mentioned it, wall of people laughing out loud.
When someone mentioned it, a wall of people laughed out loud.
It seems like a girl who is looking into Saito's face is named Louise.
It seems like a girl who is looking into Saito's face is named Louise.
Either way this is no American school. I don't see any building to symblize it.
Either way this is no American school. I don't see any recognisable buildings.
Could it be a set of movie? Filming of a movie? Saito thought that all of a sudden.
Could it be a movie set? Filming for a movie? Saito thought all of a sudden.
But this is just to big for it to be set of a movie. Was there any sight like this in Japan?
But this is just too big for it to be a movie set. Was there any location like this in Japan?


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Or could it be the new theme park?But the, why am I lying down in such a place?
Or could it be a new theme park? But then, why am I lying down in such a place?
"Mr. Colbert!"
"Mr. Colbert!"
A girl who has been called Louise shouted. Then wall of people was divided, and appeared this middle aged man.
A girl who has been called Louise shouted. The wall of people divided, and there appeared a middle aged man.
Saito thought it was funny. Because this man looked ridiculouse.
Saito thought it was funny. Because this man looked ridiculous.
He had big wooden cane and wearing black lobe that covers him.
He had a big wooden cane and was wearing a black robe that covered him.
What kind of look is that? He looks like wizard. Is he sane?
What kind of look is that? He seemed like a wizard, is he sane?
I got it, this place must be a place for cosplay.
I got it, this place must be a place for cosplay.
But this atmosphere doesn't seem right for it.
But this atmosphere doesn't seem right for it.
All of the sudden Saito feared. What am I going to do if this was religious group? It's possible.
All of the sudden Saito was gripped in fear. What am I going to do if this was a religious group? It is possible.
They must have put me to sleep somehow and brought me here while I was taking a walk in town.
They must have put me to sleep somehow and brought me here while I was taking a walk in town.
That mirror must have been a trap. If not I have no explanation for this.
That mirror must have been a trap. If not I have no explanation for this.
Saito thought to himself to be quiet until he knows what is going on.
Saito thought to himself, stay quiet, until he knews what was going on.
That girl Louise is keep on talking. Let me try it again, or please and shaking her arm wildly.
That girl Louise keeps on talking.  
I felt sorry for her to be in this weired religious group, especially since she is cute.
Let me try it again, or please and shaking her arm wildly.  
I felt sorry for her to be in this weird religious group, especially since she is so cute.
"What is it, Miss. Valiale?"
"What is it, Miss. Valiale?"
"Please! let me try the summon one more time!"
"Please! let me try the summoning one more time!"




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=== Chapter 01 - Part 1.2 ===
=== Chapter 01 - Part 1.2 ===

Revision as of 02:19, 20 August 2006

Translators Note

Cala's note: Anything in italics should be given a second look at the meaning/wording.


  • Second part will come soon.

Onizuka-gto 07:36, 19 August 2006 (PDT)


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