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"Who are you?" | "Who are you?" | ||
The girl | The girl looked into Saito's face steadily said, with the blue sky which seemed like it would fall out behind her. | ||
She | She looked like around Saito's age and she wore a white blouse with a grau pleated skirt under a black cape. She crouched down, looking in to his face as if she was disgusted. | ||
Her face is... cute. Her eyes of reddish brown | Her face is... cute. Her eyes of reddish brown danced, with her strawberry blond hair and her white flawless skin for a stage. | ||
She seems like a | She seems like a foreigner, Well... she is. But she is such a cute foreigner girl, like a doll. Or is she a half? | ||
Anyway her uniform, I wonder which school it belongs to | Anyway her uniform, I wonder which school it belongs to? I have never seen it before. | ||
Saito seems to | Saito seems to lie on his back on the ground, he lifted his head up to look around. | ||
There | There were a lot of people with black cape looking at him as a stranger. | ||
There, an endlessly rich grassy plain, he finds a huge castle, with stone walls in the distance just like he has seen in those European trip photograph. | |||
This was just like a fantasy. | |||
This | |||
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"Who am I...? I'm Saito Hiraga" | "Who am I...? I'm Saito Hiraga" | ||
"which commoner are you from?" | "which commoner are you from?" | ||
A commoner? What is that. Everyone around him | A commoner? What is that. Everyone around him are holding stick in their hands and wearing the same uniform as she is. | ||
Did I get lost in American school or something? | Did I get lost in an American school or something? | ||
"Louise, what are you going to do calling a commoner at the =Summon | "Louise, what are you going to do calling a commoner at the =Summon Servant=?" | ||
When someone said that, everyone but her who | When someone said that, everyone but her who was looking into his face started to laugh. | ||
"I... I just made little mistake!" | "I... I just made little mistake!" | ||
A girl front of Saito shouted in a refined voice | A girl front of Saito shouted in a refined voice that carried like a bell. | ||
"What are you talking about a mistake? That's your usual" | "What are you talking about a mistake? That's your usual" | ||
"Of course! after all she is Louise | "Of course! after all she is Zero Louise" | ||
When someone mentioned it, wall of people | When someone mentioned it, a wall of people laughed out loud. | ||
It seems like a girl who is looking into Saito's face is named Louise. | It seems like a girl who is looking into Saito's face is named Louise. | ||
Either way this is no American school. I don't see any | Either way this is no American school. I don't see any recognisable buildings. | ||
Could it be a set | Could it be a movie set? Filming for a movie? Saito thought all of a sudden. | ||
But this is just | But this is just too big for it to be a movie set. Was there any location like this in Japan? | ||
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Or could it be | Or could it be a new theme park? But then, why am I lying down in such a place? | ||
"Mr. Colbert!" | "Mr. Colbert!" | ||
A girl who has been called Louise shouted. | A girl who has been called Louise shouted. The wall of people divided, and there appeared a middle aged man. | ||
Saito thought it was funny. Because this man looked | Saito thought it was funny. Because this man looked ridiculous. | ||
He had big wooden cane and wearing black | He had a big wooden cane and was wearing a black robe that covered him. | ||
What kind of look is that? He | What kind of look is that? He seemed like a wizard, is he sane? | ||
I got it, this place must be a place for cosplay. | I got it, this place must be a place for cosplay. | ||
But this atmosphere doesn't seem right for it. | But this atmosphere doesn't seem right for it. | ||
All of the sudden Saito | All of the sudden Saito was gripped in fear. What am I going to do if this was a religious group? It is possible. | ||
They must have put me to sleep somehow and brought me here while I was taking a walk in town. | They must have put me to sleep somehow and brought me here while I was taking a walk in town. | ||
That mirror must have been a trap. If not I have no explanation for this. | That mirror must have been a trap. If not I have no explanation for this. | ||
Saito thought to himself | Saito thought to himself, stay quiet, until he knews what was going on. | ||
That girl Louise | That girl Louise keeps on talking. | ||
I felt sorry for her to be in this | Let me try it again, or please and shaking her arm wildly. | ||
I felt sorry for her to be in this weird religious group, especially since she is so cute. | |||
"What is it, Miss. Valiale?" | "What is it, Miss. Valiale?" | ||
"Please! let me try the | "Please! let me try the summoning one more time!" | ||
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=== Chapter 01 - Part 1.2 === | === Chapter 01 - Part 1.2 === |
Revision as of 02:19, 20 August 2006
Translators Note
Cala's note: Anything in italics should be given a second look at the meaning/wording.
- Second part will come soon.
Onizuka-gto 07:36, 19 August 2006 (PDT)
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