Difference between revisions of "Talk:Interview with Tanigawa Nagaru"
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The first question doesn't really seem to be answered by the answer. Is the question supposed to be 'why did you pursue a literary career?' |
The first question doesn't really seem to be answered by the answer. Is the question supposed to be 'why did you pursue a literary career?' |
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For the second question, change the second part to 'Has your lifestyle changed?' |
For the second question, change the second part to 'Has your lifestyle changed?' |
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'When and how the typical uncompliant character,' -> "When and how was the typical, uncompliant character" |
'When and how the typical uncompliant character,' -> "When and how was the typical, uncompliant character" |
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"She had already existed in my head when I noticed." could become "She already existed in my mind by the time I noticed (her there)." |
"She had already existed in my head when I noticed." could become "She already existed in my mind by the time I noticed (her there)." |
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"Haruhi hates boredom the most of all" -> "Haruhi hates boredom most of all" |
"Haruhi hates boredom the most of all" -> "Haruhi hates boredom most of all" |
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"For example, what in his way of thinking is unusual" -> "What is an example of his thinking being unusual" |
"For example, what in his way of thinking is unusual" -> "What is an example of his thinking being unusual" |
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"According to how we '''percept''' the reality" -> perceive |
"According to how we '''percept''' the reality" -> perceive |
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Should I continue listing or just edit it myself? |
Should I continue listing or just edit it myself? |
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[[User:Kanzar|Kanzar]] 00:48, 19 May 2007 (PDT) |
[[User:Kanzar|Kanzar]] 00:48, 19 May 2007 (PDT) |
Revision as of 09:48, 19 May 2007
--Suzumiya Haruhi ,the craziest girl in school, who made a blowed-away introduction on the first day of high school life.
to try and make 'blowed-away' sound more fluent, how about:
1. blowaway (no such word, but think Doublespeak)
2. 'who blew everyone away with her self-introduction on the first day of her high school life'
3. something else
(* the original word, 'ぶっ飛んだ', means to fly forcefully (or something)]
also suggests that 'the craziest girl in school' be changed to 'said to be the craziest girl in school'. I wanted to change it, then saw that discussions are encouraged beforehand, thus.
Thanks. :) I replaced blowed-away with the 2nd alternative. and i also changed "the craziest ..." as your suggestion. it's hard to imagine how English speakers feel about my English.:(
an Engrish speaker
The first question doesn't really seem to be answered by the answer. Is the question supposed to be 'why did you pursue a literary career?'
For the second question, change the second part to 'Has your lifestyle changed?'
'When and how the typical uncompliant character,' -> "When and how was the typical, uncompliant character"
"She had already existed in my head when I noticed." could become "She already existed in my mind by the time I noticed (her there)."
"Haruhi hates boredom the most of all" -> "Haruhi hates boredom most of all"
"For example, what in his way of thinking is unusual" -> "What is an example of his thinking being unusual"
"According to how we percept the reality" -> perceive
Should I continue listing or just edit it myself?
Kanzar 00:48, 19 May 2007 (PDT)