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These seats are stas to gather attentions. [I cant confirm the word used here] Perhaps to changed to [These seats are arranged to gather attention.]

To begin with, any type of guys are around to fight for this match after all.

attention should not be pluralized with an s.

There's a sentence [Buchou got up and her expression less.]. What does this intend to mean? Also, there's a phrase 'doesn't rarely happen' that I updated to 'doesn't happen often' because it didn't make sense in the context. What is it supposed to be? Rarely happen or doesn't happen often? --Acolyte (talk) 14:22, 10 September 2012 (CDT)

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−	* There's a sentence [Buchou got up and her expression less.]. What does this intend to mean? --[[User:Acolyte\|Acolyte]] ([[User talk:Acolyte\|talk]]) 14:22, 10 September 2012 (CDT)	+	* There's a sentence [Buchou got up and her expression less.]. What does this intend to mean? Also, there's a phrase 'doesn't rarely happen' that I updated to 'doesn't happen often' because it didn't make sense in the context. What is it supposed to be? Rarely happen or doesn't happen often? --[[User:Acolyte\|Acolyte]] ([[User talk:Acolyte\|talk]]) 14:22, 10 September 2012 (CDT)