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I think "sharp-tongued response" is pretty awkward. If possible, changing them to something else would be preferable. Does anyone have any ideas? It's along the lines of a snarky reply or a sarcastic jab, right? |
I think "sharp-tongued response" is pretty awkward. If possible, changing them to something else would be preferable. Does anyone have any ideas? It's along the lines of a snarky reply or a sarcastic jab, right? |
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| − | As well, the usage of 'companion'. It feels a bit strange in the text. I feel "friend" would generally suffice. Is it a translation of "nakama" into Chinese back into English? |
+ | As well, the usage of 'companion'. It feels a bit strange in the text. I feel "friend" would generally suffice. Is it a translation of "nakama" into Chinese back into English? --[[User:Michpig|Michpig]] ([[User talk:Michpig|talk]]) 10:07, 18 September 2012 (CDT) |
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Editing
Just a few questions.
I think "sharp-tongued response" is pretty awkward. If possible, changing them to something else would be preferable. Does anyone have any ideas? It's along the lines of a snarky reply or a sarcastic jab, right?
As well, the usage of 'companion'. It feels a bit strange in the text. I feel "friend" would generally suffice. Is it a translation of "nakama" into Chinese back into English? --Michpig (talk) 10:07, 18 September 2012 (CDT)
