Talk:Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei:Volume 1: Difference between revisions

Revision as of 19:00, 23 March 2013 edit Multipartite (talk \| contribs) 320 edits 'effected' -> 'affected' suggestion.		Revision as of 18:02, 30 March 2013 edit undo Multipartite (talk \| contribs) 320 edits Attempting to delete my previously-added Discussion contents, both as {my placing for Volume rather than Chapter was mistaken} and {because the suggestion made was implemented}. great happiness Newer edit →
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	(Suggestion: for 'the fluctuations of Psion wave motions reflect the growth of the physical body, such as changes as a result of age, and be subsequently effected', it may be appropriate to change 'effected' to 'affected'. It may also be appropriate to change 'be' to 'are'. Alternatively, it would be most effective to check the original passage in order to grasp the intended meaning.) happily rereads parts of the first volume -[[User:Multipartite\|Multipartite]] ([[User talk:Multipartite\|talk]]) 14:00, 23 March 2013 (CDT)

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