Difference between revisions of "Talk:Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei:Volume 1"

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('effected' -> 'affected' suggestion.)
 
(Attempting to delete my previously-added Discussion contents, both as {my placing for Volume rather than Chapter was mistaken} and {because the suggestion made was implemented}. *great happiness*)
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(Suggestion: for 'the fluctuations of Psion wave motions reflect the growth of the physical body, such as changes as a result of age, and be subsequently effected', it may be appropriate to change 'effected' to 'affected'. It may also be appropriate to change 'be' to 'are'. Alternatively, it would be most effective to check the original passage in order to grasp the intended meaning.) *happily rereads parts of the first volume* -[[User:Multipartite|Multipartite]] ([[User talk:Multipartite|talk]]) 14:00, 23 March 2013 (CDT)
 

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