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I hang up.<!-- Can we say this for cell phones? -EEE -->
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I end the call.<!-- Can we say this for cell phones? -EEE --><!--I think so, but changing it to avoid confusion-grrarr-->
   
   
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Unable to calm down my throbbing heart, I dive into my bed and bury my head in my pillow.
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Unable to calm the throbbing of my heart, I dive into bed and bury my head in my pillow.
   
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"What am I... What am I supposed to do now!" I yell into the pillow as I furiously bounce my legs up and down.<!-- replace "bounce" with a better word. If the sentence doesn't make any sense to begin with, hold out two fingers so as if to poke sb into his eyes and quickly move the two fingers up and down, but each in the other direction. Those are her legs. -EEE -->
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"What am I... What am I supposed to do now!" I yell into the pillow as I furiously kick my legs up and down.<!-- replace "bounce" with a better word. If the sentence doesn't make any sense to begin with, hold out two fingers so as if to poke sb into his eyes and quickly move the two fingers up and down, but each in the other direction. Those are her legs. -EEE -->
   
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I don't dislike him. Otherwise, I wouldn't be troubled now.
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I don't dislike him. Otherwise, I wouldn't be so troubled right now.
   
 
I considered him a friend; I had drawn a distinct line in my head.
  
I considered him a friend; I had drawn a distinct line in my head.
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But that's no longer enough for Kazu-kun...?
  
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In that case, he should have said it earlier. He should have said it before our friendship had grown so strong that it would hurt when it broke.
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He should have said something sooner, before our friendship had grown so strong. Now, those bonds are so tight that they’ll hurt when they break.<!--v libedit-grrarr-->
   
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Why did he had to come out with it after so long...?
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Why did he have to speak out after staying silent for so long...?<!--libedit-grrarr-->
   
   
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I hang up.
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I end the call.
   
   
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I sit down on a cushion and hold my head, at a complete loss about how to respond.
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I sit down on a cushion and with my head in my hands<!--libedit-grrarr-->, at a complete loss as to how to respond.
   
 
"......tch!"
  
"......tch!"
   
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We're male and female, so there are certain difficulties that could emerge. Nonetheless, I was so naïve as to believe that this wouldn't be the case for Kazuki.
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I know people always say that men and women can never be just friends<!--EEE: fyi, very liberal edit -grrarr-->; nevertheless, I was naïve enough to believe that nothing would happen with Kazuki.
   
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Perhaps, I have been tormenting him all along, failing to understand him properly.
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Perhaps I’ve been tormenting him all along by failing to properly understand how he felt.
   
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But why? Optimally, he should feel nothing at all for me, yet he got trapped by the silliest of all feelings!
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But why? It’d be best if he felt nothing at all toward me, yet he got trapped by the silliest of all feelings!
   
   
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<div style="border: 2px solid #220022; z-index: 2;background: #660066; padding: 3px; color: #EE0; width: 200px; font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><span style="font-size: 1.5em;">Kokone Kirino</span><br />
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One of Kazuki's friends; bright, social and popular with her classmates. She has known Daiya Oomine since kindergarten, and...?
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One of Kazuki's friends; bright, sociable and popular. She has known Daiya Oomine since kindergarten, and...?<!--EEE:the and…? part seems a bit…Engrishy?-grrarr-->
 
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Revision as of 05:13, 31 March 2013

I end the call.


Unable to calm the throbbing of my heart, I dive into bed and bury my head in my pillow.

"What am I... What am I supposed to do now!" I yell into the pillow as I furiously kick my legs up and down.

I don't dislike him. Otherwise, I wouldn't be so troubled right now.

I considered him a friend; I had drawn a distinct line in my head.

But that's no longer enough for Kazu-kun...?

He should have said something sooner, before our friendship had grown so strong. Now, those bonds are so tight that they’ll hurt when they break.

Why did he have to speak out after staying silent for so long...?


Saying that he loves me...

I end the call.


I sit down on a cushion and with my head in my hands, at a complete loss as to how to respond.

"......tch!"

I know people always say that men and women can never be just friends; nevertheless, I was naïve enough to believe that nothing would happen with Kazuki.

Perhaps I’ve been tormenting him all along by failing to properly understand how he felt.

But why? It’d be best if he felt nothing at all toward me, yet he got trapped by the silliest of all feelings!


Saying that he loves me!


Kokone Kirino

One of Kazuki's friends; bright, sociable and popular. She has known Daiya Oomine since kindergarten, and...?

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