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I don't need something that warms my very core.
 
I don't need something that warms my very core.
   
In order to become a 'box'<!--libedit-grrarr-->, I sank to the bottom of the sea. There, I numbed my body so that I'd no longer feel the bitter cold. If I were to feel warmth once more, all my memories of the bitter cold would come rushing back.<!--multiple very liberal edits-grrarr-->
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In order to become a 'box'<!--libedit-grrarr-->, I sank to the bottom of the sea where I numbed my body so that I would no longer feel the bitter cold. If I were to feel warmth once more, all my memories of the bitter cold would come rushing back.<!--multiple very liberal edits-grrarr--><!-- Hm... it's not just memories, though. The warmth would cure her numbness. -->
   
Therefore, anyone who tries to give that back to me<!--EEE:Is this ok? Refers to the ambiguous "that" referenced in lines 1 and 2…but could also be unclear/refer to the last bit of the previous paragraph-grrarr--><!--alt: return that to me-grrarr--> is my enemy.
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Therefore, anyone who tries to give that back to me<!--EEE:Is this ok? Refers to the ambiguous "that" referenced in lines 1 and 2…but could also be unclear/refer to the last bit of the previous paragraph-grrarr--><!--alt: return that to me-grrarr--><!-- Should be OK --> is my enemy.
   
   
   
—Hey, Kazuki.
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''Hey, Kazuki.''
   
So you are my enemy, huh?
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We are enemies, aren't we?
   
 
—Maria Otonashi
 
—Maria Otonashi

Revision as of 10:02, 5 May 2013

I don't need that.

I don't need something that warms my very core.

In order to become a 'box', I sank to the bottom of the sea where I numbed my body so that I would no longer feel the bitter cold. If I were to feel warmth once more, all my memories of the bitter cold would come rushing back.

Therefore, anyone who tries to give that back to me is my enemy.


Hey, Kazuki.

We are enemies, aren't we?

—Maria Otonashi

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