Difference between revisions of "Talk:Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei:Volume 9 Chapter 4"
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I changed HE to SHE on page 127 because the original text was general neutral and the magician whose name was not mentioned is female. [[User:Sashiko|Sashiko]] ([[User talk:Sashiko|talk]]) 19:52, 23 July 2013 (CDT) |
I changed HE to SHE on page 127 because the original text was general neutral and the magician whose name was not mentioned is female. [[User:Sashiko|Sashiko]] ([[User talk:Sashiko|talk]]) 19:52, 23 July 2013 (CDT) |
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| + | You mean Miya, I guess? The wording is a little vague, but the subject of the discussion is changes to the physical structure of the brain, which is different from Miya's magic as I understand it. My understanding is her magic changes the structure of the mind (soul, maybe?), not the brain. As I said though it's pretty vague. |
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Revision as of 04:45, 24 July 2013
Bold text"Turning towards Mayumi revealing a little grunt of disgust, Katsuto giggles." This sentence really bothered me since I can't imagine a guy like Katsuto giggling. Would it be possible to substitute giggling with chuckling?--Vu.P (talk) 12:10, 23 July 2013 (CDT)
I changed HE to SHE on page 127 because the original text was general neutral and the magician whose name was not mentioned is female. Sashiko (talk) 19:52, 23 July 2013 (CDT)
You mean Miya, I guess? The wording is a little vague, but the subject of the discussion is changes to the physical structure of the brain, which is different from Miya's magic as I understand it. My understanding is her magic changes the structure of the mind (soul, maybe?), not the brain. As I said though it's pretty vague.
