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'''He had found harvest in the the short exchange just now.'''  
'''He had found harvest in the the short exchange just now.'''  
Just now
 
How about this line:
How about this line:
'''He had harvested in the the short exchange just now .'''
'''He had harvested in the the short exchange just now .'''


* I believe it conveys the same meaning but naturally. What do you think? - Tasear
* I believe it conveys the same meaning but naturally. What do you think? - Tasear

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Sentences

I believe this line is a little awkward.

He had found harvest in the the short exchange just now.

How about this line: He had harvested in the the short exchange just now .

  • I believe it conveys the same meaning but naturally. What do you think? - Tasear