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* I believe it conveys the same meaning but naturally. What do you think? - Tasear |
* I believe it conveys the same meaning but naturally. What do you think? - Tasear |
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+ | :*Yea, what you proposed is better. Can you go ahead and change it? Thanks --[[User:Detalz|Detalz]] ([[User talk:Detalz|talk]]) 11:56, 29 November 2013 (CST) |
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I believe this line is a little awkward.
He had found harvest in the the short exchange just now.
How about this line: He had harvested in the the short exchange just now .
- I believe it conveys the same meaning but naturally. What do you think? - Tasear