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[[User:Akirasav|Akirasav]] 16:02, 22 September 2008 (PDT) | [[User:Akirasav|Akirasav]] 16:02, 22 September 2008 (PDT) | ||
Oops, I thought 'ran scared' had a different meaning, like wanting to run away or something. And the 'Ohh' is coming from Ryuuji and he's probably just thinking that to himself. | |||
I guess it's more like "''Ohh''...As Ryuuji fearfully prepared to run away, the one who had the courage to intervene was," | |||
[[User:Trabius|Trabius]] 17:33, 22 September 2008 (PDT) | |||
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For the following quote:
"Ohh…as Ryuuji ran scared, the one who had the courage to intervene,"
'ran scared' doesn't make too much sense. Did he 'run away scared'? Though I think 'froze up' or 'panicked' makes more sense in the context of the story.
Also, is the narrator saying 'Ohh'? It seems more like a character is saying it and consequently should be in quotes. Thanks.
Akirasav 16:02, 22 September 2008 (PDT)
Oops, I thought 'ran scared' had a different meaning, like wanting to run away or something. And the 'Ohh' is coming from Ryuuji and he's probably just thinking that to himself.
I guess it's more like "Ohh...As Ryuuji fearfully prepared to run away, the one who had the courage to intervene was,"
Trabius 17:33, 22 September 2008 (PDT)