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"You gotta be kidding..." | "You gotta be kidding..." | ||
"Look, I don't like this either! Why did I have to be stuck with a familiar like you | "Look, I don't like this either! Why did I have to be stuck with a familiar like you—?!" | ||
"Well then, send me back." | "Well then, send me back." | ||
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Louise sat on the edge of her bed and dangled her feet. Then shrugging, she spoke with an unconcerned look. | Louise sat on the edge of her bed and dangled her feet. Then shrugging, she spoke with an unconcerned look. | ||
"Hmm. But that's | "Hmm. But that's what I don't understand." | ||
"Why? Is there something like this in this world too?" | "Why? Is there something like this in this world too?" | ||
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Crossing her arms and cocking her head, Louise made an annoyed sound. | Crossing her arms and cocking her head, Louise made an annoyed sound. | ||
"Only because you would've | "Only because you would've gone on about if I didn't say so." | ||
"Well, it doesn't matter, as long as you got it. Now, send me back?" | "Well, it doesn't matter, as long as you've got it. Now, send me back?" | ||
"I told you, that's impossible." | "I told you, that's impossible." | ||
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"Yeah?" | "Yeah?" | ||
" | "...completely ineffective unless the familiar you first summoned has died." | ||
"Has what?" | "Has what?" | ||
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If you looked closely, she was actually quite cute. Slender and well-proportioned legs, thin ankles, and not too tall with a height of 155cm. | If you looked closely, she was actually quite cute. Slender and well-proportioned legs, thin ankles, and not too tall with a height of 155cm. | ||
Her eyes were like a curious kitten's, and her eyebrows traced a subtle line over them. If Saito had met her through the message boards of a dating site, he would've hopped and leaped for joy. But alas, this | Her eyes were like a curious kitten's, and her eyebrows traced a subtle line over them. If Saito had met her through the message boards of a dating site, he would've hopped and leaped for joy. But alas, this wasn't Earth. No matter how much he wanted to go back, he couldn't. Saito choked up at this thought, and his shoulders drooped. | ||
"...Yeah, alright. For the meanwhile, I guess I'll be your familiar." | "...Yeah, alright. For the meanwhile, I guess I'll be your familiar." | ||
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"What, you got a problem with that?" | "What, you got a problem with that?" | ||
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Revision as of 19:05, 19 August 2006
Translators Note
Cala's note: Anything in italics should be given a second look at the meaning/wording.
- Second part will come soon.
Onizuka-gto 07:36, 19 August 2006 (PDT)