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"Who are you?"
"Who are you?"
The girl looked into Saito's face steadily said, with the blue sky which seemed like it would fall out behind her.
The girl looked into Saito's face steadily said, with the blue sky which seemed like it would fall out behind her.
She looked like around Saito's age and she wore a white blouse with a grau pleated skirt under a black cape. She crouched down, looking in to his face as if she was disgusted.
She seemed to be around Saito's age and she wore a white blouse with a gray pleated skirt under a black cape. She crouched down, looking into his face as if she was disgusted.


Her face is... cute. Her eyes of reddish brown danced, with her strawberry blond hair and her white flawless skin for a stage.
Her face is... Cute. Her reddish-brown eyes danced, with her strawberry blond hair and her white flawless skin for a stage.
She seems like a foreigner, Well... she is. But she is such a cute foreigner girl, like a doll. Or is she a half?
She seems like a foreigner. Well... She is. But she is such a cute foreigner girl, like a doll. Or is she a half?


Anyway her uniform, I wonder which school it belongs to? I have never seen it before.
Anyway her uniform, I wonder which school it belongs to? I have never seen it before.
Saito seems to lie on his back on the ground, he lifted his head up to look around.
Saito seems to be lying with his back on the ground, he lifted his head up to look around.


There were a lot of people with black cape looking at him as a stranger.
There were a lot of people with black capes looking at him as a stranger.
There, an endlessly rich grassy plain, he finds a huge castle, with stone walls in the distance just like he has seen in those European trip photograph.
There, on an endlessly rich grassy plain, he finds a huge castle with stone walls in the distance just like he has seen in those European trip photographs.
This was just like a fantasy.
This was just like a fantasy.


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I have a headache. Saito said as he shook his head.
I have a headache. Saito said as he shook his head.
"Who am I...? I'm Saito Hiraga"
"Who am I...? I'm Saito Hiraga."
"which commoner are you from?"
"Which commoner are you from?"
A commoner? What is that. Everyone around him are holding stick in their hands and wearing the same uniform as she is.
A commoner? What is that? Everyone around him is holding a stick in their hands and wearing the same uniform as she is.
Did I get lost in an American school or something?
Did I get lost in an American school or something?
"Louise, what are you going to do calling a commoner at the =Summon Servant=?"
"Louise, what are you going to do calling a commoner at the =Summon Servant=?"
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"I... I just made little mistake!"
"I... I just made little mistake!"
A girl front of Saito shouted in a refined voice that carried like a bell.
A girl front of Saito shouted in a refined voice that carried like a bell.
"What are you talking about a mistake? That's your usual"
"What are you talking about a mistake? That's your usual."
"Of course! after all she is Zero Louise"
"Of course! After all she is Zero Louise."
When someone mentioned it, a wall of people laughed out loud.
When someone mentioned it, a wall of people laughed out loud.
It seems like a girl who is looking into Saito's face is named Louise.
It seems like the girl who is looking into Saito's face is named Louise.
Either way this is no American school. I don't see any recognisable buildings.
Either way this is no American school. I don't see any recognisable buildings.
Could it be a movie set? Filming for a movie? Saito thought all of a sudden.
Could it be a movie set? Filming for a movie? Saito thought all of a sudden.
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Or could it be a new theme park? But then, why am I lying down in such a place?
Or could it be a new theme park? But then, why am I lying down in such a place?
"Mr. Colbert!"
"Mr. Colbert!"
A girl who has been called Louise shouted. The wall of people divided, and there appeared a middle aged man.
The girl who has been called Louise shouted. The wall of people divided, and there appeared a middle aged man.
Saito thought it was funny. Because this man looked ridiculous.
Saito thought it was funny. Because this man looked ridiculous.
He had a big wooden cane and was wearing a black robe that covered him.
He had a big wooden cane and was wearing a black robe that covered him.
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I got it, this place must be a place for cosplay.
I got it, this place must be a place for cosplay.
But this atmosphere doesn't seem right for it.
But this atmosphere doesn't seem right for it.
All of the sudden Saito was gripped in fear. What am I going to do if this was a religious group? It is possible.
All of a sudden Saito was gripped in fear. What am I going to do if this was a religious group? It is possible.
They must have put me to sleep somehow and brought me here while I was taking a walk in town.
They must have put me to sleep somehow and brought me here while I was taking a walk in town.
That mirror must have been a trap. If not I have no explanation for this.
That mirror must have been a trap. If not I have no explanation for this.
Saito thought to himself, stay quiet, until he knews what was going on.
Saito thought to himself, stay quiet, until he knows what was going on.
That girl Louise keeps on talking.  
That girl Louise keeps on talking.  
Let me try it again, or please and shaking her arm wildly.  
Let me try it again, or please and shaking her arm wildly.  

Revision as of 04:53, 20 August 2006

Translators Note

Cala's note: Anything in italics should be given a second look at the meaning/wording.


  • Second part will come soon.

Onizuka-gto 07:36, 19 August 2006 (PDT)


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