Talk:Kokoro Connect:Volume 1 Chapter 8

Editing

Just a few questions.

I think "sharp-tongued response" is pretty awkward. If possible, changing them to something else would be preferable. Does anyone have any ideas? It's along the lines of a snarky reply or a sarcastic jab, right?

As well, the usage of 'companion'. It feels a bit strange in the text. I feel "friend" would generally suffice. Is it a translation of "nakama" into Chinese back into English? --Michpig (talk) 10:07, 18 September 2012 (CDT)