Talk:Date A Live:Volume 2 Chapter 4

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• Shidou lightly raised his hand to give a greeting—and froze, just like that. He dropped the bag filled with pastries that was being carried in his left hand, *Splat*, it was the sound as if a staff was now unable to enjoy eating the delicious cake.

The bit in bold is a pretty random line to appear. *splat* is a sound sfx that has nothing to do with the sound of a staff of well..anything. What were you aiming to say with that line?

• When Shidou asked her, Origami as if she is taking supplements continued adding on.

"as if she is taking supplements" to me is a another way of saying she "was taking drugs" while talking to Shidou which probably wasn't what you were trying to say at all. --Drowzycow (talk) 19:43, 11 November 2012 (CST)

i changed the supplements part to complement, but for the Staff thingy i think its an example of some sort that he created.--RikiNutcase (talk) 20:06, 11 November 2012 (CST)