Talk:Hidan no Aria:Volume6 Chapter3
Revision as of 22:27, 15 May 2011 by 131.111.184.92 (talk)
'those feet had become horrifying': should 'feet' be 'legs'? (e.g. 'ashi', which can mean either) (given that the legs are more likely to be affected by skirt length than feet) *normal glee/enjoyment regarding being able to read the story*
Suggestion: 'confirmed onee-san's words' -> 'confirmed the onee-san's words'.
