Talk:Madan no Ou to Vanadis:Volume 08 Prologue

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Original: He had not yet have power in his legs.

Suggested alternative: He had not any power in his legs yet.

Problem: "yet" doesn't seem to in correct location in the sentence. The sentence is awkward when I read it.