User:A

Note to anyone checking my edits: I know absolutely no Japanese. All my edits are from the point of view of someone trying to make the script sound like what I believe is normal English- if my proposed changes go against what the actual Japanese says, feel free to erase/delete/revert them.

Also: I don't change lines I think have a good Alt translation already.

Formerly 71.202.158.239 and 128.97.179.68 (and a few others)

Waiting for a response:

6416 (this one really needs to be looked over by someone who actually knows Japanese.)

See Category:ClannadCleanup

Finished Editing(first pass):

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