Talk:AntiMagic Academy "The 35th Test Platoon":Volume 1 Prologue

Sentences

At the beginning there was fourty of us. It appeared it's going to become a long battle, I was consterned by the feeling of the cold muzzle made for killing, but i there was no other choice than doing it.

-- There is awarded change in tense in this area. Is it possible that it's suppose to be "It appeared it was ..."

Immediately after the start, instead of using the rifle that was available, Takeru faced the deathmatch with a bayonet attached, causing his classmates to give him looks of curiousity.

-- Though it's grammatical correct it doesn't seem like the natural language. How about to give him "curious looks" instead ?

Make the changes then please~, if i feel something is off i'll just revert it, appreciate it a lot, thanks! Currently busy looking for missing raw pages and working on uploading the illustrations. --Krytyk (talk) 04:31, 4 December 2013 (CST)

Understood I will make the changes. Thanks again! Tasear

Grammer Notes

Word "I"

- It should always be capitalized when it's a single word. Example 1: I like dogs Example 2: I traveled to the moon. Example 3: James and I will go to store tomorrow.

Comments

Thanks for working on this translation! I look forward to seeing your progress. Also best luck from your first fan!