Talk:AntiMagic Academy "The 35th Test Platoon":Volume 2 Chapter 1

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Sister in law and father in law are used a few time in the page but they imply a wedding. Isn't stepsister and stepfather a better fit?

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  • Punctuation has been corrected along with spelling errors --Tasear (talk) 05:21, 11 January 2014 (CST)


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