User talk:NoodleShopRampage
Revision as of 14:42, 6 February 2014 by RikiNutcase (talk | contribs)
Absolute Duo edits
Grammar has issues but you messed up most of the words and switched sentences--RikiNutcase (talk) 06:29, 6 February 2014 (CST)
Hmm: 1. just avoid deleting words or just find a word with the exact same meaning as the previous one
2. Leave the "........." it tells the time used in their thoughts.
3. Don't switch the lines up and down.
Thank you for taking your time to edit.--RikiNutcase (talk) 06:42, 6 February 2014 (CST)
