Talk:Hidan no Aria:Volume6 Chapter3

'those feet had become horrifying': should 'feet' be 'legs'? (e.g. 'ashi', which can mean either) (given that the legs are more likely to be affected by skirt length than feet) *normal glee/enjoyment regarding being able to read the story*

Suggestion: 'confirmed onee-san's words' -> 'confirmed the onee-san's words'.

For the three Hiro Hayase changes: I agree with the first two, but for 'moved--I followed it'/'moved--and I followed it', the dash represents an appropriate break such that an 'and' is redundant, since the following is in reaction to the moving (whereas an 'and' might fit if it were an observed person doing one action, then a quick perhaps-surprising second thing after it).