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It was easy, humans could die.
 
It was easy, humans could die.
   
Even if Ryner shouted ''everyone is important to me, I don’t want to fight with anyone'', these nonsense, no one would listen to it.
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Even if Ryner shouted everyone is important to me, I don’t want to fight with anyone, these nonsense, no one would listen to it.
   
It was like yelling ''you are my close friend'', but Sion did not stop.
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It was like yelling you are my close friend, but Sion did not stop.
   
 
Then.
 
Then.
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“Oh no.” Ryner shouted as he did not stop his movements. Without releasing the magic for his increase in speed he started to chase after the carriage. Using a surprising aura, chasing after the carriage.
 
“Oh no.” Ryner shouted as he did not stop his movements. Without releasing the magic for his increase in speed he started to chase after the carriage. Using a surprising aura, chasing after the carriage.
   
Then as he chased after it, he yelled, “Urrrrrgggh I really want to vomit. I really feel like vomiting. I clearly had no bonds with hard work and tolerance when I was booorn!” Although he said something as silly as that, but he did not stop. Only when he almost caught up with the carriage did he slow his pace, continuing to run. To gain back his body strength that had been diminishing because he was too relaxed, he continued to run. He was clear that he could not gain back all of his strength before the war with Gastark, so he suppressed the urge to sleep afternoon naps, running like an idiot.
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Then as he chased after it, he yelled, “Urrrrrgggh I really want to vomit. I really feel like vomiting. I clearly had no bonds with hard work and tolerance when I was booorn!” Although he said something as silly as that, but he did not stop. Only when he almost caught up with the carriage did he slow his pace, continuing to run. To gain back his body strength that had been diminishing because he was too relaxed, he continued to run. He was clear that he could not gain back all of his strength before the war with Gastark , so he suppressed the urge to sleep afternoon naps, running like an idiot.
   
 
Then as he ran he read the continuation of the report.
 
Then as he ran he read the continuation of the report.
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But until Ryner was twelve or thirteen years old, they would send a letter every two years.
 
But until Ryner was twelve or thirteen years old, they would send a letter every two years.
   
But the contents of the letter was always the same. “To the cowardly Ryner. Haven’t you had the thoughts of coming over to us? It’s clear that if you always stay in Roland you will never open your destiny. Miller, Germer, they both think that you should go out of the country because you have become weak due to despair. If you say something we will come help you, so come to my side quickly. Because we already have the power to save you. In the two months when you receive this letter we will be at XXXX, you have to come. Understand? If you don’t come I’ll kill you.
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But the contents of the letter was always the same. “To cowardly Ryner. Haven’t you had the thoughts of coming over to us? It’s clear that if you always stay in Roland you will never open your destiny. Miller, Germer, they both think that you should go out of the country because you have become weak due to despair. If you say something we will come help you, so come to my side quickly. Because we already have the power to save you. In the two months when you receive this letter we will be at XXXX, you have to come. Understand? If you don’t come I’ll kill you.
   
Your queen forever, Pia Varliere
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Your queen forever Pia Varliere we will really wait for you. If you want to come, come.
 
Well, we will really wait for you. If you want to come, come.
 
   
 
Your friend Peria Peruula.” He would always receive this letter. In addition in the XXXX there would be a different location written there every time.
 
Your friend Peria Peruula.” He would always receive this letter. In addition in the XXXX there would be a different location written there every time.
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Thinking about his fellow comrades who he had been separated from in the distant past, he had an expression that was happy but also unhappy.
 
Thinking about his fellow comrades who he had been separated from in the distant past, he had an expression that was happy but also unhappy.
   
Furthermore people who had '''Congenital Magical Abnormality''' had a different hair colour from normal people, their hair would turn to the colour of water, so Pia had beautiful long blue hair.
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Furthermore people who had congenital magical abnormality had a different hair colour from normal people, their hair would turn to the colour of water, so Pia had beautiful long blue hair.
   
 
And now the mercenary squad that he had to carry out the successful negotiations with was called Azure Princess too.
 
And now the mercenary squad that he had to carry out the successful negotiations with was called Azure Princess too.
   
“Talking about which, why didn’t I notice it…” Softly murmuring.
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“Talking about which why didn’t I notice it…” Softly murmuring.
   
 
Then he tilted his slightly depressed face to look at the sky as he proceeded towards Geihlficlant.
 
Then he tilted his slightly depressed face to look at the sky as he proceeded towards Geihlficlant.
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He looked to the northern sky that had probably had more troublesome opponents than the Geihlficlant king, sighing, saying: “…Urgh~ I have always ignored the invitations, then Pia upon discovering that I have suddenly become the enemy must be very angry…”
 
He looked to the northern sky that had probably had more troublesome opponents than the Geihlficlant king, sighing, saying: “…Urgh~ I have always ignored the invitations, then Pia upon discovering that I have suddenly become the enemy must be very angry…”
   
Then he started to train his body with more vigor. If he did not do that, if the situation became one that he had to fight Pia no matter what, the present him probably wouldn’t even be able to say anything.
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Then he started to train his body with more vigor. If he did not do that, if the situation became one that he had to fight Pia no matter what, the present me, probably wouldn’t even be able to say anything.
   
 
She is a genius of that stage, just because they admired this strong person, Peria, Zohra, would follow her.
 
She is a genius of that stage, just because they admired this strong person, Peria, Zohra, would follow her.
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Then.
 
Then.
 
 
“…Well, even if people die, even if war erupts, this is a petty matter compared to the blue sky, anyway this kind of rash thoughts about peace peace~ and the likes, I would agree with them…” He muttered, then laughed lightly.
 
“…Well, even if people die, even if war erupts, this is a petty matter compared to the blue sky, anyway this kind of rash thoughts about peace peace~ and the likes, I would agree with them…” He muttered, then laughed lightly.
   
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But Vois smiled, revealing an expectant smile.
 
But Vois smiled, revealing an expectant smile.
   
“…Well, even if I am your slave now it’s fine. Because I will betray you soon, then stab your ugly face.”
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“…Ma even if I am your slave now it’s fine. Because I will betray you immediately, then stab your ugly face.”
   
 
Saying that, he raised his head.
 
Saying that, he raised his head.

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