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Hmph…is that what she's asking.
 
Hmph…is that what she's asking.
   
Well, if right now, I say something like: "This is for the sake of preventing myself from being raged and shot at," I'll be made into live food for several .45 ACP bullets. As such, I--
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Well, if right now, I say something like: "This is for the sake of preventing myself from being raged and shot at," I'll be made to become the live food for several .45 ACP bullets. As such, I--
   
 
"Butei Charter article 6: "Reflect by yourself, act by yourself". If you're a Butei, then you'll think of it yourself, right?"
 
"Butei Charter article 6: "Reflect by yourself, act by yourself". If you're a Butei, then you'll think of it yourself, right?"
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Confused her.
 
Confused her.
   
After shaking her head up and down in one big nod, Aria looked at her open left hand, right in front of her own face--
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From shaking her head up and down in one big nod, Aria looked at her open left hand, right in front of her own face--
   
 
With a feeling as if she couldn't tear her eyes away from the ring, shining on her ring finger--
 
With a feeling as if she couldn't tear her eyes away from the ring, shining on her ring finger--
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--''Thud! Splash!''
 
--''Thud! Splash!''
   
She caught her foot on the edge of the mini fountain, and tipped over backwards.
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She caught her foot in the edge of the mini fountain, and tipped over backwards.
   
 
She really fits perfectly inside the pool of that fountain, which couldn't be anything but around the size of a bathtub.
 
She really fits perfectly inside the pool of that fountain, which couldn't be anything but around the size of a bathtub.
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(Doing this, this time I can spend with Aria, too is...coming to an end, isn't it.)
 
(Doing this, this time I can spend with Aria, too is...coming to an end, isn't it.)
   
So I thought, and I felt a loneliness that I could not begin to describe creep into my chest. <!---heart? or keep it literal.-->
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So I thought, and I felt a loneliness that I could not begin to describe begin to creep into my chest.
   
Aria...is selfish, self-centered, presumptuous- an intensely troubling girl.
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Aria...is selfish, self-centered, assumptive, an intensely troubling girl.
   
 
But only because of that, being together with her isn't boring. Whether it was good or bad, it was always exciting.
 
But only because of that, being together with her isn't boring. Whether it was good or bad, it was always exciting.

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