User contributions for Randomdude02

14 October 2008

• 03:2203:22, 14 October 2008 diff hist +5 m Zero no Tsukaima:Volume7 Chapter10 Missing words
• 03:2003:20, 14 October 2008 diff hist +3 m Zero no Tsukaima:Volume7 Chapter10 When I saw the earlier change, it just didn't feel right. It just doesn't fit Delfringer's personality as well. So, I changed it back to probably
• 03:1703:17, 14 October 2008 diff hist +7 m Zero no Tsukaima:Volume7 Chapter10 Just typos and such I saw in the current edition

13 October 2008

• 22:0822:08, 13 October 2008 diff hist 0 m Zero no Tsukaima:Volume7 Chapter10 Capitalization error
• 22:0522:05, 13 October 2008 diff hist −3 m Zero no Tsukaima:Volume7 Chapter10 Using the same word twice so soon in the same sentence just sounds bad.
• 21:5721:57, 13 October 2008 diff hist +1 m Zero no Tsukaima:Volume7 Chapter10 A typo

19 September 2008

• 07:3507:35, 19 September 2008 diff hist 0 m Zero no Tsukaima:Volume7 Chapter10 I forgot to change the words sword man to swordsman in a previous edit.
• 07:3307:33, 19 September 2008 diff hist +4 m Zero no Tsukaima:Volume7 Chapter10 It was grammatically incorrect ealier. As for sword man, swordsman just sounds metter. Also, there was no punctuation at the end of that sentence. And continues was missing the 's'
• 07:3007:30, 19 September 2008 diff hist −1 m Zero no Tsukaima:Volume7 Chapter10 There's that rule where if someone's name ends with S and you're indicating ownership, then you're supposed to just add the dash thing '
• 07:2607:26, 19 September 2008 diff hist +1 m Zero no Tsukaima:Volume7 Chapter10 It was grammatically wrong ealier, saying "the fireball the exploded"
• 07:2407:24, 19 September 2008 diff hist −1 m Zero no Tsukaima:Volume7 Chapter10 Gandalfr was spelled as Gandalifer ealiear.
• 07:2107:21, 19 September 2008 diff hist 0 m Zero no Tsukaima:Volume7 Chapter10 I didn't see why if "Lances of Ice" was like that, it had to be "Knives of wind" and "balls of fire"
• 07:1807:18, 19 September 2008 diff hist +2 m Zero no Tsukaima:Volume7 Chapter10 Without the subdivision of the commas, it just sounds wrong.
• 07:1607:16, 19 September 2008 diff hist 0 m Zero no Tsukaima:Volume7 Chapter10 I think that was a comma splice, but I'm not sure.
• 07:1507:15, 19 September 2008 diff hist 0 m Zero no Tsukaima:Volume7 Chapter10 It just feels wrong having a comma there. I think it's a comma splice, but I'm not sure.
• 07:1307:13, 19 September 2008 diff hist +5 m Zero no Tsukaima:Volume7 Chapter10 Without what it just sounded wrong.
• 07:1107:11, 19 September 2008 diff hist 0 m Zero no Tsukaima:Volume7 Chapter10 There was a comma where it looks like a period should have been.
• 07:1007:10, 19 September 2008 diff hist +1 m Zero no Tsukaima:Volume7 Chapter10 It's a word, albiet a censored one, so it should have puncuation. Since it's censored, I imagined Saito cursing.
• 07:0907:09, 19 September 2008 diff hist 0 m Zero no Tsukaima:Volume7 Chapter10 It just plain seems wrong to me that it's not capitalized, even if it's just a sound effect.
• 07:0707:07, 19 September 2008 diff hist +1 m Zero no Tsukaima:Volume7 Chapter10 Earlier it sounded grammatically incorrect; feel free to change it if I'm wrong
• 07:0607:06, 19 September 2008 diff hist 0 m Zero no Tsukaima:Volume7 Chapter10 Since it is just an object, it shouldn't be capitalized.
• 07:0207:02, 19 September 2008 diff hist −2 m Zero no Tsukaima:Volume7 Chapter10 It didn't end the sentence in quotation marks; rather, it used the contraction symbol.
• 07:0107:01, 19 September 2008 diff hist +1 m Zero no Tsukaima:Volume7 Chapter10 It was missing the symbol used to indicate a contraction, which 'let's' is.
• 06:5906:59, 19 September 2008 diff hist −1 m Zero no Tsukaima:Volume7 Chapter10 Your only supposed to use an when the following word starts with a vowel.
• 06:5706:57, 19 September 2008 diff hist 0 m Zero no Tsukaima:Volume7 Chapter10 Earlier it was using a comma splice; I replaced with a semicolon to make it grammatically correct.
• 06:5606:56, 19 September 2008 diff hist +2 m Zero no Tsukaima:Volume7 Chapter10 Earlier it just sounded grammatically incorrect with "Hawkins want to..."
• 06:5406:54, 19 September 2008 diff hist 0 m Zero no Tsukaima:Volume7 Chapter10 Sword man just sounds akward, grammatically incorrect. Swordsman just sounds a lot better in my opinion.
• 06:2406:24, 19 September 2008 diff hist +1 m Zero no Tsukaima:Volume6 Chapter6 - MTL Earlier it was a typo saying firs; now it says first

18 September 2008

• 06:5606:56, 18 September 2008 diff hist 0 m Zero no Tsukaima:Volume6 Chapter3 The earlier typo was the word preferRED; it has now been changed to preferred

7 June 2008

• 06:1106:11, 7 June 2008 diff hist +2 m Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter3 I noticed in a thread that some were asking for Montmorency the Perfume to be changed to Montmorency the Fragrance, so I changed it.
• 06:0806:08, 7 June 2008 diff hist +2 m Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 I noticed in a thread that some were asking for Montmorency the Perfume to be changed to Montmorency the Fragrance, so I changed it.