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11:5811:58, 15 May 2012 diff hist −21 Tsukumodo:Volume 1 Memories and Notes The phrase "The pressure of her pen stroke had left an impression on the underlying sheet" is also acceptable in English. Memory power, however, is a somewhat awkward find. It's not like the term isn't thrown around, but it's very rare to hear it.

21:3021:30, 12 May 2012 diff hist +23 Tsukumodo:Volume 1 Memories and Notes Edited a few sections in regards to word choice.
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12:2412:24, 12 May 2012 diff hist +1 Tsukumodo:Volume 1 Statue I had misspelled temperature in a previous edit. Aside from that, I made some additional changes to word choice. BT keeps losing my editing data, so I'm resorting to more frequent saves.
12:0612:06, 12 May 2012 diff hist +24 Tsukumodo:Volume 1 Statue No edit summary
11:4311:43, 12 May 2012 diff hist +8 Tsukumodo:Volume 1 Statue Fixed some awkward wording and attempted to insert more variation where I saw fit.
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10:4410:44, 12 May 2012 diff hist +1 Tsukumodo:Volume 1 Memories and Notes Changed a few choice words around and bits of sentence structure.

12:3112:31, 11 May 2012 diff hist +38 m Tsukumodo:Volume 1 Statue No edit summary
10:3410:34, 11 May 2012 diff hist −11 Tsukumodo:Volume 1 Statue Mostly edited word choice. "For a wonder, however, there also appear to be some who claimed that the statue had depicted a peaceful Buddha." Claimed that it used to look like Buddha or that it just did?
08:3908:39, 11 May 2012 diff hist −15 m Tsukumodo:Volume 1 Statue No edit summary
07:5707:57, 11 May 2012 diff hist +11 m Tsukumodo:Volume 1 Statue No edit summary
07:1707:17, 11 May 2012 diff hist +1 m Tsukumodo:Volume 1 Statue Mostly minor edits. One question: is there a specific buddha in mind? Or does the passage specifically refer to Siddhārtha Gautama Buddha appearing in his dream?

13:0913:09, 9 May 2012 diff hist −9 m Tsukumodo:Volume 1 Statue "A child laid in bed" as opposed to "was laying in her bed."
13:0113:01, 9 May 2012 diff hist +37 Tsukumodo:Volume 1 Statue Edited some word choice around.
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08:3308:33, 9 May 2012 diff hist −3 m Tsukumodo:Volume 1 Statue No edit summary
08:2708:27, 9 May 2012 diff hist +88 Tsukumodo:Volume 1 Statue Re-wrote some awkward phrases. There was a part that I was confused at. Where you first mentioned coughing. Was it supposed to be sneezing? Or just foreshadowing that Saki's confiditon had gotten worse, but the protagonist had yet to notice?
06:1906:19, 9 May 2012 diff hist +5 m Tsukumodo:Volume 1 Statue No edit summary

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