Talk:Campione!:Volume 6 Chapter2

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Oops, comments were cut off...

"by letter": just as you send things "by email" not "by emails"

"explaination" is not a word

"even" applies to the cake, not the person, but fine, rephrase it for greater clarity. --Zzhk 10:15, 5 August 2012 (CDT)