Talk:High School DxD:Volume 10 Life 2
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These seats are stas to gather attentions. [I cant confirm the word used here] Perhaps to changed to [These seats are arranged to gather attention.]
To begin with, any type of guys are around to fight for this match after all.
attention should not be pluralized with an s.
- There's a sentence [Buchou got up and her expression less.]. What does this intend to mean? Also, there's a phrase 'doesn't rarely happen' that I updated to 'doesn't happen often' because it didn't make sense in the context. What is it supposed to be? Rarely happen or doesn't happen often? --Acolyte (talk) 14:22, 10 September 2012 (CDT)
About the first phrase I think it's "Buchou got up expressionless" if we take into account what Ise think afterwards about the sexy expression that she had. --Braiam (talk) 14:47, 10 September 2012 (CDT)
