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The flag fluttered in the evening wind.
 
The flag fluttered in the evening wind.
   
Tigre, Elen, and Lim moved ahead of the Zhcted Army and returned to Celesta.
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Tigre, Ellen, and Lim moved ahead of the Zhcted Army and returned to Celesta.
   
Some soldiers, including Bertrand, returned to Celesta earlier to inform the people of their victory and to prepare a feast.
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Some soldiers, including Batran, returned to Celesta earlier to inform the people of their victory and to prepare a feast.
   
 
Even if it was a small form of gratitude, Tigre wished to greet the soldiers of Zhcted. He also wanted to restore the beauty of his town. Its revival would begin tomorrow.
 
Even if it was a small form of gratitude, Tigre wished to greet the soldiers of Zhcted. He also wanted to restore the beauty of his town. Its revival would begin tomorrow.
   
Incidentally, Tigre had emptied the eight quivers Bertrand held for him.
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Incidentally, Tigre had emptied the eight quivers Batran held for him.
   
 
Usually, archers carry two quivers at most. Any more and it would hinder movement. He could only use that many in a fierce battle.
 
Usually, archers carry two quivers at most. Any more and it would hinder movement. He could only use that many in a fierce battle.
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“--- All right.”
 
“--- All right.”
   
With a new cloth wound about Tigre's hand, Elen laughed quietly.
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With a new cloth wound about Tigre's hand, Ellen laughed quietly.
   
 
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“Thanks. You really saved me.”
 
“Thanks. You really saved me.”
   
Tigre gave his thanks. The cloth Titta wrapped around his hand was drenched in blood, so he had it changed.
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Tigre gave his thanks. The cloth Teita wrapped around his hand was drenched in blood, so he had it changed.
   
 
“For the time being, consider this a victory.”
 
“For the time being, consider this a victory.”
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He had many things to think about besides Thenardier.
 
He had many things to think about besides Thenardier.
   
It was not just Duke Ganelon and Thenardier, he worried about the reaction of the King and the various aristocrats. He was also anxious about Zhcted and Elen.
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It was not just Duke Ganelon and Thenardier, he worried about the reaction of the King and the various aristocrats. He was also anxious about Zhcted and Ellen.
   
 
Above all, he was worried about the black bow in his hand.
 
Above all, he was worried about the black bow in his hand.
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He communicated with it. Was it telling him its intent?
 
He communicated with it. Was it telling him its intent?
   
''--- It resonated with Elen's Silver Flash...''
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''--- It resonated with Ellen's Silver Flash...''
   
Elen did not understand the reason for this.
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Ellen did not understand the reason for this.
   
 
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Why did the [Silver Flash] respond?
 
Why did the [Silver Flash] respond?
   
Though he looked in interest at the Silver Flash at Elen's waist, the wind only blew, as if teasing him.
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Though he looked in interest at the Silver Flash at Ellen's waist, the wind only blew, as if teasing him.
   
 
After thinking for a time, Tigre sighed and gave up.
 
After thinking for a time, Tigre sighed and gave up.
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“{{furigana|[King of the Magic Bullet]|Madan no Ou}}, is it?”
 
“{{furigana|[King of the Magic Bullet]|Madan no Ou}}, is it?”
   
Elen glanced at Tigre and laughed as if pleased.
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Ellen glanced at Tigre and laughed as if pleased.
   
 
“Not bad. I'll call you that from now on.”
 
“Not bad. I'll call you that from now on.”
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“At least fix your facial expression.”
 
“At least fix your facial expression.”
   
Though she spoke formally, Elen's mouth was loose as she held back a smile. Tigre scratched his head and sighed without any tension.
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Though she spoke formally, Ellen's mouth was loose as she held back a smile. Tigre scratched his head and sighed without any tension.
   
 
“The story is interesting, but it has nothing to do with my bow.”
 
“The story is interesting, but it has nothing to do with my bow.”
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“Do you not want to become King?”
 
“Do you not want to become King?”
   
Elen tilted her head, as if she had read what was deep in Tigre's heart.
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Ellen tilted her head, as if she had read what was deep in Tigre's heart.
   
 
Though he had not given it much thought, he responded in such a way.
 
Though he had not given it much thought, he responded in such a way.
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“Sleeping until noon, going out for a hunt.”
 
“Sleeping until noon, going out for a hunt.”
   
Tigre shrugged his shoulder and smiled bitterly. Elen's ruby irises sparkled as she recalled his words
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Tigre shrugged his shoulder and smiled bitterly. Ellen's ruby irises sparkled as she recalled his words
   
 
“Tigre, I have something to say to you.”
 
“Tigre, I have something to say to you.”
   
Looking at Tigre, Elen took a deep breath and bewildered Tigre with a smile suiting her age.
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Looking at Tigre, Ellen took a deep breath and bewildered Tigre with a smile suiting her age.
   
 
“--- You belong to me now.”
 
“--- You belong to me now.”
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''--- How should I answer...''
 
''--- How should I answer...''
   
It was not just Elen. Titta was waiting in the town. If he explained that he was still a prisoner of war, what would she say?
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It was not just Ellen. Teita was waiting in the town. If he explained that he was still a prisoner of war, what would she say?
   
 
Though Tigre looked to Lim for help with a glance, he was ignored.
 
Though Tigre looked to Lim for help with a glance, he was ignored.

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