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===Part 1===
 
===Part 1===
   
Applause welcomed Kazuki and the others.
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Sir Applause welcomed Kazuki and the others.
   
 
Queen Kaguya had returned to the port of Yokohama Harbor.
 
Queen Kaguya had returned to the port of Yokohama Harbor.
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“Let’s fight, for the sake of the world.”
 
“Let’s fight, for the sake of the world.”
   
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The knights boarded the magic light train that was heading to the garrison, while Kazuki and group were boarding a different train that was heading to the academy. In the middle of doing that, Kazuki felt a disturbing presence at his back on the platform.
 
The knights boarded the magic light train that was heading to the garrison, while Kazuki and group were boarding a different train that was heading to the academy. In the middle of doing that, Kazuki felt a disturbing presence at his back on the platform.
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===Part 4===
 
===Part 4===
   
With various events occurring, like that, the ship passed over the Panama Canal and then began to north for a while.
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Through various events occurred like the ship passing over the Panama Canal and then went north for a while.
   
 
“The ship has lost control.”
 
“The ship has lost control.”
   
Gathering everyone on the bridge, the ship captain Akane-senpai said that.
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Gathering the people in the bridge, the ship captain Akane-senpai said that.
   
That voice which kept its cool was unlike Akane-senpai, this being because she had heard about it beforehand from Kazuki.
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That voice which kept its cool that was unlike Akane-senpai was because she had heard about it beforehand from Kazuki.
   
It wasn’t like the sea was stormy or anything. The waves were calm and there was also almost no wind.
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It wasn’t like the sea was stormy or anything. The waves were calm, there was also almost no wind.
   
But a great amount of rainbow magic power was covering the sea surface, leaving not a single spot exposed.
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But the great amount of rainbow magic power was covering the sea surface leaving not a single spot exposed.
   
 
That magic power was carrying the ship somewhere.
 
That magic power was carrying the ship somewhere.
   
No matter how the bridge tried to steer the rudder it was meaningless. There was nothing they could do except letting themselves to be carried away.
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No matter how the bridge tried to steer the rudder it was meaningless. There was nothing they could do except letting themselves be carried.
   
 
Rainbow colored magic power――it was the magic power of the manager.
 
Rainbow colored magic power――it was the magic power of the manager.
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Naturally he told the story of Basileon to everyone too. Though he almost half-forgot to do that.
 
Naturally he told the story of Basileon to everyone too. Though he almost half-forgot to do that.
   
If they headed to Atlantis at the appointed time, they would be naturally guided to the gate for the use of Japan, that was what that guy said. This was what he meant.
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If they headed to Atlantis at the appointed time, they would be naturally guided to the gate for use of Japan, that was what that guy said. This was what he meant.
   
“It feels like we were put on a conveyor belt. Just by leaving it alone we will be carried until the gate of Japan right at noon on the first of September. The speed and the direction are automatic.”
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“It feels like we are put on a belt conveyor. Just leaving this alone we will be carried until the gate of Japan right at the noon on the first of September. The speed and the direction are automatic.”
   
 
“Tou-!” Suddenly the window opened and Hikaru-senpai leaped into the sea.
 
“Tou-!” Suddenly the window opened and Hikaru-senpai leaped into the sea.
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Even though senpai wasn’t moving her legs and arms at all, her body was naturally advancing keeping pace with the ship.
 
Even though senpai wasn’t moving her legs and arms at all, her body was naturally advancing keeping pace with the ship.
   
“Ahaha! Even a flesh and blood human is properly getting carried! Amazing!!”
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“Ahaha! Even the flesh and blood humans is properly getting carried! Amazing!!”
   
Logically speaking that was true, but Hikaru-senpai’s outrageous challenge made all of them feel like their hearts were going to stop. He patted down his chest in relief.
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Logically speaking that was true, but Hikaru-senpai’s outrageous challenge made all of them feel like their heart were going to stop. He patted down his chest in relieve.
   
 
“That looks fun!” Karin continued after Hikaru-senpai and dived into the sea.
 
“That looks fun!” Karin continued after Hikaru-senpai and dived into the sea.
   
Giving a glance to that, “……Good grief, what kind of magic power is this I wonder.” Akane-senpai sighed.
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Giving a glance to that, “……Good grief, what kind of magic power this is I wonder.” Akane-senpai sighed.
   
 
This wasn’t a magic power of a single magician or a Diva.
 
This wasn’t a magic power of a single magician or a Diva.
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The remaining of [the imperfect ultimate illusion] created from the previous Ragnarok that ended in failure was used to manage the current Ragnarok. That was this rainbow magic power.
 
The remaining of [the imperfect ultimate illusion] created from the previous Ragnarok that ended in failure was used to manage the current Ragnarok. That was this rainbow magic power.
   
And then they came to see a blue magic power cloud enshrouding their path ahead. This excessively dense magic power cloud that was different from usual was also created from the magic power of the manager.
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And then they came to see blue magic power cloud enshrouding their path ahead. This excessively dense magic power cloud that was different from usual was also created from the magic power of the manager.
   
 
“It’s dangerous if we become unable to see anything so please return to the ship!”
 
“It’s dangerous if we become unable to see anything so please return to the ship!”
   
Kazuki called out towards Hikaru-senpai and Karin.
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Kazuki called out Hikaru-senpai and Karin.
   
The ship entered inside the magic power cloud. With this the radar and the GPS, all kinds of devices became unusable. They also mostly couldn’t see the scenery around them, the ship was now not moving by its own rudder but by the tide of magic power. Now everyone didn’t understand directions anymore like which was left and right or north and south.
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The ship entered inside the magic power cloud. With this radar and GPS, all kind of devices became unusable. They also mostly couldn’t see the scenery around them, the ship was now not moving by its own rudder but by the tide of magic power. Now everyone didn’t understand directions anymore like which was left or right or north or south.
   
 
They were completely blindfolded to where this ship was advancing to.
 
They were completely blindfolded to where this ship was advancing to.
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Everything was entrusted to the so called manager.
 
Everything was entrusted to the so called manager.
   
Surely somewhere inside this blue magic power cloud that was enshrouding a terrifically wide range, there were also the other countries’ ships. <!--sentence needs fixing--> It was unknown which country would enter Atlantis through which gate…….
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Surely somewhere inside this blue magic power cloud that was enshrouding terrific wide range, there were also other countries’ ships. It was unknown which country would land at Atlantis through which gate…….
   
   
   
   
One more day progressed after that. Thereupon on the path with a bad field of vision because of the magic power cloud, suddenly a deep black steel wall began to become visible, towering high. That was the wall that the investigation team of America witnessed.
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One more day progressed after that. Thereupon at the path with bad field of vision because of the magic power cloud, suddenly a deep black steel wall began to be visible towering high. That was the wall that the investigation team of America witnessed.
   
However, at the path of the ship of Kazuki and group, the wall opened a rectangle hole with a snap.
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However at the path of the ship of Kazuki and group, the wall opened a rectangle hole with a snap.
   
America’s investigation team couldn’t discover this kind of wall or anything else, but Basileon said that he hid the entrances using magic so he guessed that it reacted to Kazuki’s group getting closer and the seal was dismissed. That was to say that this was undoubtedly the entrance gate for Japan’s use.
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America’s investigation team couldn’t discover this kind of wall or anything else, but Basileon said that he hid the entrances using magic so he guessed that it reacted to Kazuki’s group getting closer and the seal was dismissed. That was to say this was undoubtedly the entrance gate for Japan’s use.
   
It was as though the ship was sucked in, entering the hole of darkness even blacker than the wall of black steel.
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It was as though the ship was sucked, entering the hole of darkness even blacker than the wall of black steel.
   
 
Inside the wall was dark. If there was a gateway then the path should be visible due to the light from the outside, but he couldn’t see anything like that. Before long right in the middle of the darkness, it seemed that the ship stopped somehow.
 
Inside the wall was dark. If there was a gateway then the path should be visible due to the light from the outside, but he couldn’t see anything like that. Before long right in the middle of the darkness, it seemed that the ship stopped somehow.
   
Kazuki looked at his watch. It was eight o’clock on the first of September. It would be four more hours until noon.
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Kazuki looked at his watch. It was eight o’clock of first September. It would be four more hours until noon.
   
It seemed that the transport using rainbow magic power wasn’t as accurate as he thought, there was still time.
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It seemed the transport using rainbow magic power wasn’t as accurate as he thought, there was still time.
   
 
The ship was in a state of standing by.
 
The ship was in a state of standing by.
   
“This is like telling us to build up our courage until the time comes isn’t it. ……But being in the waiting room will only make the athlete get nervous instead.”
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“This is like telling us to build up our courage until the time comes isn’t it. ……But being in waiting room will only make the athlete getting nervous instead.”
   
Mio said such. To that everyone was nodding.
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Mio said. To that everyone was nodding.
   
   
   
   
Four hours later, everyone concerned gathered at the bridge again looking over the watch with held breaths.
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Four hours later, everyone concerned gathered in the bridge again looking over the watch with a held breath.
   
The second hand of the clock that was moving steadily was advancing to the number of twelve, at the same time the hour hand and the minute hand also went *tick!* in their movements.
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The second hand of the clock that was moving steadily was advancing to the number of twelve, at the same time the hour hand and the minute hand also went *tick!* in their movement.
   
 
――The three hands of the clock overlapped into one at the number twelve.
 
――The three hands of the clock overlapped into one at the number twelve.
   
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The noon came.
Noon had come.
 
   
The darkness on their path was excised swiftly from below to above, rectangle light was overflowing out. It was the light of the outside. The ship began to glide towards it.
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The darkness at their path was excised swiftly from below to above, rectangle light was overflowing out. It was the light of the outside. The ship began to glide towards it.
   
The ship exited the gate. There, Atlantis was before their eyes.
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The ship exited the gate. There was Atlantis before their eyes.
   
 
A wharf that looked like a natural port was in front of their eyes, the ship was made to come alongside it. While being overwhelmed by the scenery before their eyes, Kazuki’s group that was a hundred knights got down on the land in order.
 
A wharf that looked like a natural port was in front of their eyes, the ship was made to come alongside it. While being overwhelmed by the scenery before their eyes, Kazuki’s group that was a hundred knights got down on the land in order.

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