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“Good morning, you group of trash! Nice to meet you!”
 
“Good morning, you group of trash! Nice to meet you!”
   
At the same time an arrogant voice sounded out, the classroom door opened with a powerful momentum. A blonde girl appeared.
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At the same time an arrogant voice sounded out, the classroom door opened with a powerful momentum. A blond girl appeared.
   
 
Kazuki could not believe his own eyes, and everybody in the class was in an uproar.
 
Kazuki could not believe his own eyes, and everybody in the class was in an uproar.
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The sharp pupils that looked around the inside of the room were green. Her legs were also extremely slender.
 
The sharp pupils that looked around the inside of the room were green. Her legs were also extremely slender.
   
“…WAHH, so cute!”
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“……WAHH, so cute!”
   
 
“Just like a doll!”
 
“Just like a doll!”
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“Hey, who was the one that just said cute!? Stand up for me!!”
 
“Hey, who was the one that just said cute!? Stand up for me!!”
   
She, *ban,ban,ban*<ref>SFX for banging sounds.</ref>, hit the podium. With a clear and sharp voice, she issued out a roar.
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She, ban,ban,ban,<ref>SFX for banging sounds.</ref> hit the podium. With a clear and sharp voice, she issued out a roar.
   
“…My name is Liz Liza Westwood. I was born in the birthplace of Magic, England. Listen up! I am here to make you trashes become independent knights. You should be honored!”
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“……My name is Liz Liza Westwood. I was born in the birthplace of Magic, England. Listen up! I am here to make you trashes become independent knights. You should be honored!”
   
Was this person really the class teacher…No, perhaps a person, who is able to serve as a teacher in the Knights Academy, could not be judged from their appearance.
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Was this person really the class teacher……No, perhaps a person, who is able to serve as a teacher in the Knights Academy, could not be judged from their appearance.
   
“Although I may look more or less young, but this is due to a certain accident, as a result my growth has been slowed down. Although I have already retired, but I still have the appropriate practical experience. Don’t take on an attitude of looking down on me. Anyways, this class…Che, what a troublesome class”
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“Although I may look more or less young, but this is due to a certain accident, as a result my growth has been slowed down. Although I have already retired, but I still have the appropriate practical experience. Don’t take on an attitude of looking down on me. Anyways, this class……Che, what a troublesome class”
   
 
Liz Liza-sensei violently smacked her lips and her gaze stayed on Kazuki.
 
Liz Liza-sensei violently smacked her lips and her gaze stayed on Kazuki.
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That phrase was filled with provocative intent, it made Kazuki feel displeased and he could not help but refute against that tiny teacher.
 
That phrase was filled with provocative intent, it made Kazuki feel displeased and he could not help but refute against that tiny teacher.
   
“I did not misunderstand anything…And, I do not plan on remaining at E-Rank.”
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“I did not misunderstand anything……And, I do not plan on remaining at E-Rank.”
   
 
The so-called E-Rank was the results of the exams before entering the school.
 
The so-called E-Rank was the results of the exams before entering the school.
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The freshmen of Magic Division are asked to test the amount of Magic Power they had as well as an actual test on normal Magic.
 
The freshmen of Magic Division are asked to test the amount of Magic Power they had as well as an actual test on normal Magic.
   
The Normal Magic that manipulates your own Magic Power was divided into 5 systems: <Psychokinetic Magic>,<Pyrokinesis Magic>, <Physical Enhancement Magic>, <Perceptibility Enhancement Magic> and <Telepathic Magic>.
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The Normal Magic that manipulates your own Magic Power was divided into 5 systems, <Psychokinetic Magic>,<Pyrokinesis Magic>, <Physical Enhancement Magic>, <Perceptibility Enhancement Magic> and <Telepathic Magic>.
   
 
However, Kazuki, who was always aiming to be a swordsman, had only trained the Physical Enhancement Magic and Perceptibility Enhancement Magic. On the contrary, he was surrounded by elites, who were born with extensive Magic Power and were aiming to be a Stigma Magic User.
 
However, Kazuki, who was always aiming to be a swordsman, had only trained the Physical Enhancement Magic and Perceptibility Enhancement Magic. On the contrary, he was surrounded by elites, who were born with extensive Magic Power and were aiming to be a Stigma Magic User.
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Thus, Kazuki had gotten E-Rank, the worst grade.
 
Thus, Kazuki had gotten E-Rank, the worst grade.
   
“A good answer. It seems that he, himself, understands his own situation clearly. The rest of you should also not cry out in excitement because there is a special person, a male…Although saying that, do not bully him. Because all of you are still not independent enough. There is no spare time to underestimate others. Everyone should focus on their goal of improving themselves!”
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“A good answer. It seems that he, himself, understands his own situation clearly. The rest of you should also not cry out in excitement because there is a special person, a male……Although saying that, do not bully him. Because all of you are still not independent enough. There is no spare time to underestimate others. Everyone should focus on their goal of improving themselves!”
   
 
Although her tone was poor, it seems like she was a person who did not want Kazuki to be made a fool of.
 
Although her tone was poor, it seems like she was a person who did not want Kazuki to be made a fool of.
   
“…Also, in our class, aside from the only E-Rank in the grade, the only two A-Rank in the grade are also present. Are they throwing the top-level students and the last-place student to this competent teacher? Che, this is really the worst class.”
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“……Also, in our class, aside from the only E-Rank in the grade, the only two A-Rank in the grade are also present. Are they throwing the top-level students and the last-place student to this competent teacher? Che, this is really the worst class.”
   
 
“Yes! I am the A-Rank Amasaki Mio!”
 
“Yes! I am the A-Rank Amasaki Mio!”
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“As the daughter from the noble magician family, the Amasaki household, I have the goal of becoming the strongest Magic User——That is, the Student Council President! I will not lose to anyone! Everybody, please take care of me!”
 
“As the daughter from the noble magician family, the Amasaki household, I have the goal of becoming the strongest Magic User——That is, the Student Council President! I will not lose to anyone! Everybody, please take care of me!”
   
“…I did not let you introduce yourself. Sit down, you self-centered trash!”
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“……I did not let you introduce yourself. Sit down, you self-centered trash!”
   
 
After Liz Liza-sensei finished saying this in amazement, Mio sat down obediently.
 
After Liz Liza-sensei finished saying this in amazement, Mio sat down obediently.
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A-Rank. This phrase made the classroom become noisy again.
 
A-Rank. This phrase made the classroom become noisy again.
   
"There are only two A-Ranks in the grade, yet both of them are actually in this class, how amazing!”
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There are only two A-Ranks in the grade, yet both of them are actually in this class, how amazing!”
   
 
“Who is the other A-Rank?”
 
“Who is the other A-Rank?”
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Just when a student, who courageously raised her hand to ask, appeared, a sigh came from behind Kazuki.
 
Just when a student, who courageously raised her hand to ask, appeared, a sigh came from behind Kazuki.
   
“…Nonsense. The results of the rank before forming a contract with a Diva, there is no meaning to it.”
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“……Nonsense. The results of the rank before forming a contract with a Diva, there is no meaning to it.”
   
 
Liz Liza-sensei nodded towards the rear of Kazuki.
 
Liz Liza-sensei nodded towards the rear of Kazuki.
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The impression that she gave off was the color white ——or rather, silver white. Her silver-colored hair sparkled. The color of her skin was also white as snow.
 
The impression that she gave off was the color white ——or rather, silver white. Her silver-colored hair sparkled. The color of her skin was also white as snow.
   
Long ears extended from both side of her expressionless face…It was an extremely beautiful <Elf>!
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Long ears extended from both side of her expressionless face……It was an extremely beautiful <Elf>!
   
 
The so-called Elf, it is a human whose state of existence had been distorted due to the effects of the Magic they had within themselves.
 
The so-called Elf, it is a human whose state of existence had been distorted due to the effects of the Magic they had within themselves.
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That posture was beautiful, just like a fantasy. It gave off an impression that the inhabitants of myths had already been brought here in real time.
 
That posture was beautiful, just like a fantasy. It gave off an impression that the inhabitants of myths had already been brought here in real time.
   
Because they hold a far greater Magic Power than average females, it was said that many could communicate with spirits. Although there were still many aspects of the ecology of elves that were not understood compared to the Magical Beast…
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Because they hold a far greater Magic Power than average females, it was said that many could communicate with spirits. Although there were still many aspects of the ecology of elves that were not understood compared to the Magical Beast……
   
 
Due to this special trait, within these 15 years, elves were the object of prejudice and discrimination.
 
Due to this special trait, within these 15 years, elves were the object of prejudice and discrimination.
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“Is there something on my body, E-Rank? Am I such a rare thing?”
 
“Is there something on my body, E-Rank? Am I such a rare thing?”
   
The monotone voice was scolding Kazuki’s gaze. Looks like he had stared at her for a long period of time…If that’s the case, he could also not blame the surrounding girls that had constantly been looking at him.
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The monotone voice was scolding Kazuki’s gaze. Looks like he had stared at her for a long period of time……If that’s the case, he could also not blame the surrounding girls that had constantly been looking at him.
   
“Sorry…Iya, because I felt that you were so beautiful. In the places such as the hair…”
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“Sorry……Iya, because I felt that you were so beautiful. In the places such as the hair……”
   
 
In order to prevent her from misunderstanding that he was treating her as an exotic animal, he accidentally blurted out the embarrassing truth. In fact, the amount of time he watched her fascinated should be fairly long.
 
In order to prevent her from misunderstanding that he was treating her as an exotic animal, he accidentally blurted out the embarrassing truth. In fact, the amount of time he watched her fascinated should be fairly long.
   
“I’m beautiful? …You are treating me as a monster, right?”
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“I’m beautiful? ……You are treating me as a monster, right?”
   
 
Koyuki felt that it was inconceivable and tilted her head. Because of this action, her silver-colored hair brushed against each other and sparkled.
 
Koyuki felt that it was inconceivable and tilted her head. Because of this action, her silver-colored hair brushed against each other and sparkled.
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“Saying such insincere words to conceal your attitude, it is really disgusting.”
 
“Saying such insincere words to conceal your attitude, it is really disgusting.”
   
''…Why would you think like that? Is it because you are an elf?''
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''……Why would you think like that? Is it because you are an elf?''
   
 
Kazuki generated feelings close to anger and could not help but raise his voice.
 
Kazuki generated feelings close to anger and could not help but raise his voice.
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Koyuki’s expression changed for the first time. Her eyes widened. She held her breath and whispered.
 
Koyuki’s expression changed for the first time. Her eyes widened. She held her breath and whispered.
   
“…Anyways, it would be better if you turn your head to the front.”
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“……Anyways, it would be better if you turn your head to the front.”
   
 
After issuing an idiotic “Eh?” sound, Kazuki finally remembered the time and location.
 
After issuing an idiotic “Eh?” sound, Kazuki finally remembered the time and location.
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For a while, the eyes of all the people in the classroom was focused on Kazuki. Liz Liza-sensei was angry to the extent that her veins were twitching.
 
For a while, the eyes of all the people in the classroom was focused on Kazuki. Liz Liza-sensei was angry to the extent that her veins were twitching.
   
“S, sorry…” Kazuki lowered his shoulders and hurriedly turned his head back to the front.
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“S, sorry……” Kazuki lowered his shoulders and hurriedly turned his head back to the front.
   
 
Kazuki hated discrimination. He could not help but lose his cool. As expected, his training was far from enough.
 
Kazuki hated discrimination. He could not help but lose his cool. As expected, his training was far from enough.
   
“…Strange guy.” Muttering sounds from behind clearly came over.
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“……Strange guy.” Muttering sounds from behind clearly came over.
   
“I seem to have some misunderstanding about your gaze. But I…Towards a person, who could praise others as beautiful face-to-face, I…also don’t know how to respond. So please do not stare at me.”
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“I seem to have some misunderstanding about your gaze. But I……Towards a person, who could praise others as beautiful face-to-face, I……also don’t know how to respond. So please do not stare at me.”
   
 
Liz Liza-sensei adjusted her state and continued to speak.
 
Liz Liza-sensei adjusted her state and continued to speak.
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''A Contract with a Diva. I was slightly looking forward to it.''
 
''A Contract with a Diva. I was slightly looking forward to it.''
   
“Having said that, contracting with a Diva is based on the class order, so while we are waiting, let us have a self-introduction. Then, let’s begin from the seating number #1…Although I want to say that, but since Amasaki has already introduced herself, let’s forget it.”
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“Having said that, contracting with a Diva is based on the class order, so while we are waiting, let us have a self-introduction. Then, let’s begin from the seating number #1……Although I want to say that, but since Amasaki has already introduced herself, let’s forget it.”
   
 
“P, Please wait! I only said so little content, it is not enough for everybody to understand!”
 
“P, Please wait! I only said so little content, it is not enough for everybody to understand!”
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“Your character features has already been adequately communicated to everybody, Amasaki-san from the noble magician family.”
 
“Your character features has already been adequately communicated to everybody, Amasaki-san from the noble magician family.”
   
After hearing Liz Liza-sensei’s sarcasm, the classroom burst into laughter, but Mio ignored all of this and stood up.
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After hearing Liz Liza-sensei’s sarcasm, the classroom burst into laughters, but Mio ignored all this and stood up.
   
 
Her large eyes sparkled and following her turning movements, her two ponytails drew an arc.
 
Her large eyes sparkled and following her turning movements, her two ponytails drew an arc.
   
The instant she turned around ——It made everybody have the feeling that the cherry blossoms were in full bloom.
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The instant she turned around ——It made everybody had the feeling that the cherry blossoms were in full bloom.
   
 
“I am the future Student Council President, Amasaki Mio! My hobbies are drawing, writing poems and also knitting! My specialty is of course, Magic!” The loud voice was active again.
 
“I am the future Student Council President, Amasaki Mio! My hobbies are drawing, writing poems and also knitting! My specialty is of course, Magic!” The loud voice was active again.
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Mio, who looked around the classroom, met eyes with Kazuki’s and those large eyes suddenly widened.
 
Mio, who looked around the classroom, met eyes with Kazuki’s and those large eyes suddenly widened.
   
Then, her expression suddenly brightened up and she, *pata,pata*<ref>SFX for waving sounds.</ref> waved. It was as if she was reunited with someone important and her cheeks had also turned as red as an apple.
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Then, her expression suddenly brightened up and she, pata,pata<ref>SFX for waving sounds.</ref> waved. It was as if she was reunited with someone important and her cheeks had also turned red as apples.
   
''…Is she waving towards me?'' Kazuki was at a loss and looked behind to confirm the situation.
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''……Is she waving towards me?'' Kazuki was at loss and looked behind to confirm the situation.
   
 
It could be that she was waving in response to someone behind me.
 
It could be that she was waving in response to someone behind me.
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However, behind Kazuki, only an expressionless Koyuki was there.
 
However, behind Kazuki, only an expressionless Koyuki was there.
   
Kazuki was confused and once again turned back to the front. He watched Mio’s symmetrical face turn unsightly and with an unhappy voice, she said “That’s all I have to say!” and, *dosun*<ref>Sound of something heavy sitting down/falling</ref> ,sat back onto her seat.
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Kazuki was confused and once again turned back to the front. He watched Mio’s symmetrical face turn unsightly and with an unhappy voice, she said “That’s all I have to say!” and, dosun<ref>Sound of something heavy sitting down/falling</ref> ,sat back onto her seat.
   
…What had just happened? Being mistaken about the person…and the like, this kind of situation should be impossible.
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……What had just happened? Being mistaken about the person……and the like, this kind of situation should be impossible.
   
 
——Afterwards, the self-introduction also smoothly moved forward.
 
——Afterwards, the self-introduction also smoothly moved forward.
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His specialty was, what? Because aside from saying his <Specialty was sword skills.>, he could not think of any other words, so he said it just like this.
 
His specialty was, what? Because aside from saying his <Specialty was sword skills.>, he could not think of any other words, so he said it just like this.
   
“Even though he is in Magic Division…yet he said sword skills.”
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“Even though he is in Magic Division……yet he said sword skills.”
   
 
The instant Kazuki said this phrase out, the classroom had become a cynical atmosphere immediately.
 
The instant Kazuki said this phrase out, the classroom had become a cynical atmosphere immediately.
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The person who said this without hiding it ——was the earlier Amasaki Mio.
 
The person who said this without hiding it ——was the earlier Amasaki Mio.
   
“What about sword skills, there is no value in it in the Magic Division. In the traditional Ancient Style Sword Skill Family there was a male, who had the goal of becoming a swordsman, yet obtained an enigma…Although I have heard this kind of news, but haven’t you already entered the Magic Division? Even though you will become a Stigma Magic User, do you still have lingering feelings towards the sword skills? Although you are an E-Rank and the last place, but you know sword skills, how unsightly!”
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“What about sword skills, there is no value in it in the Magic Division. In the traditional Ancient Style Sword Skill Family there was a male, who had the goal of becoming a swordsman, yet obtained a enigma……Although I have heard this kind of news, but haven’t you already entered the Magic Division? Even though you will become a Stigma Magic User, do you still have lingering feelings towards the sword skills? Although you are an E-Rank and the last place, but you know sword skills, how unsightly!”
   
 
After hearing the phrase <Lingering Feelings towards Sword Skills>, Kazuki felt that his chest was brutally stabbed.
 
After hearing the phrase <Lingering Feelings towards Sword Skills>, Kazuki felt that his chest was brutally stabbed.
   
…No, even so, <Sword Skills have no value> this phrase was also too much!
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……No, even so, <Sword Skills have no value> this phrase was also too much!
   
 
“Hayashizaki. In the Magic Division, the moment Sword Skills or the like are said, there will be no one that would give you a good look. This is the place where Magic elites gather. Not only do they hold a sense of rivalry, most of the people look down upon Sword Skills. Perhaps you feel that it is impossible to accept, but this is that kind of place. There is no helping it. Tell this to yourself. Sit down.”
 
“Hayashizaki. In the Magic Division, the moment Sword Skills or the like are said, there will be no one that would give you a good look. This is the place where Magic elites gather. Not only do they hold a sense of rivalry, most of the people look down upon Sword Skills. Perhaps you feel that it is impossible to accept, but this is that kind of place. There is no helping it. Tell this to yourself. Sit down.”
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When Kazuki wanted to retort, Liz Liza-sensei preemptively put an end to it.
 
When Kazuki wanted to retort, Liz Liza-sensei preemptively put an end to it.
   
''…What is this?'' While his thoughts were left inside his heart, Kazuki returned to his seat.
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''……What is this?''While his thoughts were left inside his heart, Kazuki returned to his seat.
   
 
Mio stared at Kazuki without looking away. After her eyes met with his, she immediately pulled a long face and turned to the front again.
 
Mio stared at Kazuki without looking away. After her eyes met with his, she immediately pulled a long face and turned to the front again.
   
…Indeed, the Summoning Magic he saw at the entrance ceremony was very amazing.
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……Indeed, the Summoning Magic he saw at the entrance ceremony was very amazing.
   
 
But, in order to activate that large Magic, the amount of time required to chant was long. If you are on the battlefield, it made one feel that it was fatal.
 
But, in order to activate that large Magic, the amount of time required to chant was long. If you are on the battlefield, it made one feel that it was fatal.
   
If that’s the case…Even Sword Skills could have a bout with it, right?
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If that’s the case……Even Sword Skills could have a bout with it, right?
   
He did not know about the other Sword Skills, but if it was the Hayashizaki-Ryuu that he and Kanae were taught by his adoptive father…
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He did not know about the other Sword Skills, but if it was the Hayashizaki-Ryuu that he and Kanae were taught by his adoptive father……
   
 
“Compared to the me that has a greater amount of magic power only because I am female, I feel that the Sword Skills that were honed through efforts are more worthy of respect.”
 
“Compared to the me that has a greater amount of magic power only because I am female, I feel that the Sword Skills that were honed through efforts are more worthy of respect.”
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After hearing this sentence that seemed to be encouraging him, Kazuki was surprised and looked behind. He noticed that Koyuki had stood up.
 
After hearing this sentence that seemed to be encouraging him, Kazuki was surprised and looked behind. He noticed that Koyuki had stood up.
   
“…Your circumstances do not matter to me. ——I am Hiakari Koyuki. No hobbies and specialty. Finish.”
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“……Your circumstances do not matter to me. ——I am Hiakari Koyuki. No hobbies and specialty. Finish.”
   
 
After hearing the A-Rank’s overly cold self-introduction, the classroom began to become noisy again.
 
After hearing the A-Rank’s overly cold self-introduction, the classroom began to become noisy again.

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